I Burn

i burn
to share with you
my soul
but what is this tattered thing worth
why should you even care

and it is that
uncaring
that I have learned to trust
feelings are fickle
and 'forever' is just a lie

Author's Note

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Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they are all fickle---those feelings...they come and go...and we just cannot rely on them.

thoughtful piece.

j.

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Very sad feelings here but like always, you are master of crafting your emotions into words that are enjoyable reading for your audience. Truly amazing. I love your work, my friend.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is very sad and quite emotional. Im sorry you feel like this.
I think you need to think higher of yourself.
Everyones soul and feelings are worth something, and we all need someone to talk to.
Deep soulful write.

[Rob Santana]

Passion burns strong here my friend.