Red

A Poem by Caradoc

Twenty words or less...

Thump, thump, pulse beats
Rhythm in my head
Feel of flesh 'tween teeth
And tangy Red
Intoxicating on my tongue...

© 2017 Caradoc

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Matthew Kult

Rhythmically vampiric

Good read,

With love,

Matthew

Posted 2 Years Ago

Rob Santana

Still writing with excellent penmanship.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ellie Qtz

Pretty great! The part where it was 'and tangy red', I had read the poem to fast for it to sound good though, but other than that it was amazing!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on May 22, 2017
Last Updated on May 22, 2017

Author

Caradoc

Withered Wonderland

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