Because ;

just..something i wrote.

 

 

I'm not too sure anymore, all I'm sure of is of this pain.

The feelings I have are hard to explain

Because maybe if God gave me a chance, I'd believe in him.

Because maybe if someone lit up my smile, it wouldn't be so dim.

Maybe my heart, isn't as it use to be

Maybe i'm someone else, rather than me.

I've learned so much through out the years

I've cried so much, I'm out of tears.

Forever was a lie.

because within seconds, you said goodbye.

but If love was a heart

and lovers never were to part

What would be the point of life?

To go on living, you need heart break, not an automatic Husband or wife.

Yes it's true, your first love never dies,

It's also true that you find hope in your lovers eyes

but heart break leaves a big open space,

And sometimes what you need, you didn't even know you wanted in the first place.

 

Author's Note

Sucks, i know.

Reviews

[Kaitlyn]

I really liked it. It made so much sense, because people don't know what they want and they think love will just be something that's automatically there. I have some news; it won't be, or at least not always. You may end up loving who you least expect. Good job and I love the wordplay, it was very nice. One thing I did see was that some of the lines were really short in contrast with the longer ones, which is fine, but it felt kind of awkward to read. HOPE I HELPED!!! Keep writing!

[Bran the Broken]

Hmmm. A bit rambling, but honest and unassuming and simple and emotional.