Savage

Back to the Twilight poems, first one that does not have to do with ooooeeey gooey love. haha.

Pain searing...

Not hearing myself screaming

as the venom burns my vains

No images in my head

Can't even think straight

Slowly too slow

the pain fades

from my fingertips

 

I awake...

My eyes flew open

So clear, everything so sharp

More pain in the back of my throat

I see where I am

In an alley behind a bar

 

I smell...

a sceant so sweet, so intoxicating

My muscles tighten, and I coil to spring

Soaring through the air

with supernatural speed

I catch my prey, and sink in my teeth

Drink, I drink

 

 

I cry...

Because I realize what I am

A monster, a vampire

right from the depths of hell

No tears fall from my eyes

I can't cry but I can try

 

I want to burn...

Beacuse I'm savage

Author's Note

This vampire is a Newborn made ny Riley in Eclipse. Please ignore spelling errors ect.

Reviews

[Melissa Kesead]

Great imagery and a vivid picture of what one newly transformed would act like. I look forward to reading more.

[Lorrie]

Well done. You have captured what I believe every newly born vampire feels the first time they realize what they have become. Look forward to reading more of your work.

[Aurora Night]

Good read. I enjoyed how you made the character feel. You really brought the character to life with your word choice. i hope to read more of your writing.

[ShadowHaze]

wow.. I loved this!! It's so good! and you based it off of a new born made by Riley... Wow, i love it! amazing!!

[Tina Kline]

I really enjoyed your vampire poem. Its a good description for a
newly born vampire and the burning pain that they feel with
their first experience of the Hunger. Good work! I enjoyed the Twilight series
and the movie.

Tina