Pull

Darkness pull me through

Darkness pull me in

I want to feel your gentle fingers

I want to feel the caress across my skin

My soul is wrapped in sheets

My body is wrapped in passion

Darkness take me gently

Darkness take me now

Before I change my mind

Before I lose control

I want to feel the pain

I want to feel the lust

My heart is throbbing madly

My body beating hungrily

Darkness don't let go

Darkness keep on loving

Author's Note

Thnaks for the review! whatd do u think? anything i need to change?

Reviews

[Sseoni]

You don't need to change a thing! Your poem is perfect the way it is! It was beautifully written, greatly detailed, and wonderfully descriptive! I loved it! Fantastic job! :D

[Call me Jane]

I absulutaly love it. You don't need to change any thing