Vanish

I hate feeling like this 
so hurt and in pain 
As if nothing that matters
will ever be the same 

The lights gone out 
of my fragile soul 
The darkness has moved in 
taken over control 

I wish I could sleep 
for a thousand years 
Then wake up in heaven 
where there are no tears 

I wish I could fly 
away from this life 
Set my heart free 
let my spirit take flight 

I want to disappear 
Into the darkest void 
From the cruel hearts of man 
where I can't be destroyed

Just vanish from sight

and be no more

But I have to stay

for the ones I adore

 

Reviews

[Devanshu Rajput]

the emotions were flowing from the poem...i know that no hell would be cruel than earth...you are a great writer...the piece was excellently excellent...wonderfully wonderful...and fantasticly fantastic...lovely piece...wonderful read...greatly written...keep writing like this...:-)

DEVANSHU RAJPUT

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you so much!

[Wpww!!!]

can someone read some of mine!!! pleaze

[Carolann Dowsett]

Later today i will when I've finished my work :)

[Ahmad Cox]

So gripping in emotion and pain and sorrow but I like how at the end you offer a ray of hope and a reason to keep on going.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[Wpww!!!]

this is the most amazing sorta of thriller poem ever!!! graet.. . magnificent... spectacular job!!!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[Wpww!!!]

love it!!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you

[Taylor]

It' good jess... =3

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you

[KeeD]

Hopefully the darkest void can be the brightest light, the warmest heart of a new lover. Very well written. And we do adore you < 3

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you so much Kee your a sweet guy :)

[Written Volumes]

You and I seem to have similar ways of how we were treated by love, and loved ones. As our heart was tugging by the forces of evil, until we no longer to bear the burden.
Nicely written!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :) Yes very true.

[Whiskurz]

A feeling we have all felt my friend....Life has a way of chewing us up a spitting us out.....Very well penned.....Whisk

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you and yes so very true.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Well I can understand feeling like this but without life on Earth you cannot appreciate heaven and most importantly earn your place there by what you do here.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Yes true, thank you :)

[Donald Meikle]

Selfishness is ok but as you say there are limits!

[Carolann Dowsett]

True. Thank you.