Starlings

All these different creatures live in a magical world. They each have different powers. Some of them have good intentions with their powers but some have bad ones that will create problems.

Some are good and some are bad! They are little creatures in the world of Starlings. Nimsy the water nymph is the queen of rivers,oceans,lakes and everything with water. She lives deep in the ocean. With sky blue wings, big eyes, perfect eyebrows and tiny ballet flats she flies over the sea greeting all the other nymphs. She is an adorable, sweet and furry little friend. She flies into the forest to her friend Rose the flower nymph. Rose is sweet too her generous and brightful colors bring good intentions to everyone. Pink, purple and yellow designs cover her wings and her lavender skin is so soft it looks like silk. With a wave of her hand pixie dust sprinkles on dead flowers to bring them back to life.

© 2014 Carolina Constante

Author's Note

This is my first story and it’s just a beginning to my whole story let me know what you guys think. Do you have any ideas of more creatures I should add in? What kind of powers should I say they have? What events should happen in my story? Please don't leave any hateful comments this is just the beginning. <3

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EmmaT306

My question is what age group are you writing for? If it's for children, which is the impression I got, you have the right tone and wording for it. As for other creatures and their powers that will depend on the answer to my question. And as for events... decide what message you would like to impart to your audience and the story will write itself. I look forward to reading more.