Symphony of Words

 

 

I'm writing a symphony of words

 

 

 

dark ink playing on a canvass of white. Each note, each word is

 

 

 

from

 

 

my heart and soul. Each thought and desire,

 

 

I long to make whole, the different layers of me

 

 

And when the symphony of words is spoken silently,

 

 

in homes near and far, a melody reaches into a soul....a

 

 

 

 

 

Loving Passion of Muse and pen, liquid fire upon the sands of

 

 

 

time.

 

 

Reviews

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Wow. That's beautiful. Being an Irish man that you are (i dated an irishman before) I am sure you guys are intense and passionate, and I can feel that from your words. Kind of like a "romeo and juliete feel" plus...i love it when anyone uses the word "soul" in their poems. i do all the time. well, i will send you some read requests you may enjoy.

your cafe friend...kena

[Lydia]

This is a beautiful way to describe writing. "Muse and pen" - I really liked that. :]

[Debbie_Philly]

This is an amazing poem... i just loved it... very well written and it danced beautifully in my ear... than you !!

[tina edwards]

Leo you make a beautiful symphony with those words

[Legion]

Not bad. Go deeper. Think you might have more to say than you might have imagined. I can feel it with what I just read.

[The Autumn Faerie]

Very beautifully written...
I loved the ending.
^.^