Untouched Heart

Some hearts are healed
Some are broken

Some are locked away
Some are open

This is usually how it is for eternity
But some how, except for me

I've been growing patterns across my face
And a coil swirling around my base

I have been untouched by sweet lover's kiss
Because the ball is too fast, so I swing and miss.

Author's Note

I wrote this a while ago and I felt like putting it online now. Tell me what you think :)

Reviews

[Leigh]

You have described this feeling well and I get a sense of openness from you, which makes this real, just great

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you so much :)

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Such a beautiful poem, I love it!
100/100

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for your review.

[Shay]

I like how u divided two lines in each stanza and the poem is really nice

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I like it. It's sweet and sad at the same time. Life can feel that way but one of these days you'll make a hit. And you won't feel so wound up and left out. Nice job on this.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you. I wrote such a long time ago I can't remember what I wrote it for :P

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I love it. This is very intense. The mood of this poem really lets your audience know the feelings you are attempting to get across. Good job :)

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for your kind words. :)