DIALOGUE IN GLASS

collaboration poetic heroics and cassie

Examine me seductively,

With your eyes,

As your pour into me,

Your fortified drink,

 

Caress my delicate frame,

Gently but lovingly,

Careful not to clatter me,

 

Brace your lips for mine,

And let your tongue,

Dance on my lips,

 

your steady hands
swirl burgundy‘d reflections
pursed lips expect more

we dance beautifully
to mute tones of inebriation
you lead, i follow; when we switch
neither of us notices,

we have  become one
a grey spirit‘d union, lost
between a floor and empty bottles

Reviews

[Mark]

LOL I like this one, romancing the bottle!

[Cassie]

Thank you mark, glad you liked it.

[Rita L. Sev]

You two dance beautifully together, Cassie and Travis! Great images of both the good and the bad in this tale of a relationship...

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thanks, Rita she carried me... I simply followed her lead, but thank you for those wonderful words.

[Cassie]

Thank you Rita, glad we made it happen, Travis...thank you for your review below, you also helped a great deal.

[Frieda P]

Oh look at the naughty side of Sunshine...woo, I think you do this bad girl well Cassie, one of your best, well done! Or should I say well lit...ha, love this my friend. :-)

[Cassie]

Hahahaha...naughty side of me, lets just say you and Jack are my teachers...lol. Thank you for peeking in and liking, watch out for more naughty stuff

[Frieda P]

Ha, don't blame us you bad girl! I didn't realize this was a collaboration, no wonder...that Travis is trouble...hahah, great job you two, and my pleasure.

[Cassie]

hahahahahaha....Travis is trouble, that is why you should look out for more....teacher!!!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Me, trouble? No way. ;) lol thanks for the high compliments ladies.

[Baby Ricochet]

My it's getting hot up in here.

[Cassie]

hahahahaha....thankyou for taking your time

[Dhaye]

I think this is your second piece about drinking, Cassie.
Nice word play. Good output of you two.
Nice job!

[Cassie]

Thank you Dhaye, glad we penned it right.

[Jack...]

Yes ma'am, now this is the kind of dancing I like. You swept me off of my feet with this one Sunshine. oh listen the music is starting up again, may I have thid dance?

[Cassie]

Thank you Jack, I actually did not do this alone, I would like you to guess which part i did....make a wild guess....

[Jack...]

I would say stanzas 1,3,5. And my apologies to Travis...I falied to read the subtitle. So my review now becomes a testament to how beautifully you two work together. I had no idea it was two poets, you blend so very well. Nice collaboration you two and so sorry I missed it on the first shot.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

No need to apologize, Jack. She's a wonderful talent, I just rode her coat tails. I do thank you for such mind words.

[Cassie]

Travis, Thank you for humbling me and for agreeing to collaborate...Jack you are right a bit, just like Travis said, I wrote the first three and then he ended it. Thank you for taking your time

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

It was a no-brainer type of decision. I'm thankful you extended me the opportunity.

[Jack...]

Well at least I got 2 right. :) Still wonderful you two.