Who can limit love?

"Who can limit love" Words from the great writer Virgil.

in                        Who can limit love?

She wanted to be the Joan of Arc in the mystery of love.
I told her. Love is like the early morning tide of the sea. You can't control or stop the flow of the water.
You must cherish and enjoy.

She wanted to love, dance and fall into the paradise of two people seeking the same things.
She whispered in the mist of the midnight hour.
"True love, foolish love.
Wild love, free love.
Uncontrolled love. Lets me swim and die in your arms. My kind and sweet Poet."

She was wild and crazy. I knew she would stop only for a time. Some woman are to be loved
forever and some woman give just enough to make you stay. Some woman will take you home.
Make you fall crazy in unconditional love  than like the free and wild wind. They will escape before you know if you had won or lost.

Sweet Jenny savour the sweet kiss. She was infatuate with love. She whispered poetry of passion.
"Hold me. Break me and destroy my hunger hidden in the darkness of the long night.
Make me scream words of gratitude and salvation. I will you let you be  my first love. Last love."

We broke bread and drank sweet red wine and I told her she was my fire and I was her wood. I was a-flamed
with hope in dreams in the safety of her arms. Even if forever is only tonight.

She smile and whispered. "Kind Poet. You taught me. "Who can control love?" We are just people
seeking shelter and needing to dwell in some sort of joy and happiness. I can't promise forever. Forever
is just a word used without real thoughts. Time is the measure of love."

Two people watched the star and the Summer moon. Sweet Jenny was wishing for escape.
Johnnie made a simple wish. For one more night.

                                    Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

A new poem. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Violet's Run]

"Hold me.Break me and destroy my hunger hidden in the darkness of the long night Make me scream words of gratitude and salvation. I will let you be my first love. Last love"
My I have heard words such as these before.. and when you do RUN.... !!! Ah but the girl was pretty and the wine was red and there was a star and a summer moon.. ah What you gonna do but run with it.. I like this a ton.. It is perky and has wit and I like it..
thanks for sharing

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment.. Good to had freedom and fun before we got old.

[Stephen]

Lol! I am chuckling allot reading this "Magical Mysterica" write!
Here you made a minor error in this statement : "Lets me swim and die in your arms." it's not "LETS" but "LET" .. replace it with : "Let me swim and die in your arms." Overall's fine! I love the line : "Your my fire & am your wood!" That's very firey! The whole piece's hilarious indeed!

[Coyote Poetry]

Humor and love is one. You must know laughter, tears and long talks. When two people do not communicate. There is no love. Thank you for the help. "Your my fire and I'm your wood" was a line in a book of Virgil. He wrote of love over 2000 years ago with energy and hope.

[Stephen]

Glad to know some new things! Yeah, when two people don't communicate there's no love but when two people look into each others eyes with musing even a single word, there's love! Because we humans're born with love so we've got feelings which means, we can feel the sensibility of heart with whom we fall in love.
Yeah, I love that line, thanks for letting me about the line!

[Praveeta]

Magical write on love. Thanks for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Praveeta for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Praveeta]

My pleasure.

[Rossen]

Wonderfully told.. your voice real and true,with the word love used over and over yet
gaining in it's strength and beauty. Wonderfully written by a man who knows how to truly
share poetry...hat's off and thumb's up...



Rossen

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Rossen for reading and the kine words. I do appreciate.

[captain]

awe, an inspiring poem sir.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I have been reading the ancient writers. Giving me reasons to write.

[Cryingkate]

Oh Dear I erased my long drawn comment.... LOL I just talk too much.

This is a Very Beautiful Write. It's another one that sweeps me away into some other world,place and time.
I think Emily hit it on the head... A Fairytale !

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kate. I appreciate the kind words.

[Emily]

Wow. Exceptional work, Coyote. I fell in love with this poem. It's magical and makes me feel as if I'm in a fairytale.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Emily. Good to live in a fairytale if we can..

[A. Amos]

This is one interesting write, full of love, feelings and emotions, I truly enjoyed, Thank you for sharing

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. Just reading too much London and Dryden.