Three short poems about love

Trying to be less epic for one day.

                      Three short poems about love




                                      Open doors


Open the shades wide.
Lite the incense candles of lavender and sweet wild flowers.
Don't be afraid of the dark and lonely nights.
We are just flesh and bones.
Needing to dance into the light.
Hiding no secrets and discover forgotten laughter and smiles.
We need to open the locked doors. Whisper sweet and secrets words to be
hidden by the blackness of the night.
We will honor the moon with the gift of visions of two people.
Finding peace and calm in the safety of the midnight hours.


                              Dead Poets

Dead Poet's don't complain.
Ancient writers rejoice when someone whispered their words.
Bringing to life great tales of love, war and life.



                           Bare feet


Jenny walked barefooted upon the sand toward me.
She was pretty as an Angel in her white Summer dress.
She sat next to me. Her legs laid across my legs.
I caressed her soft and tender feet and  I told her.
You are the sun, the moon. You are my hope and joy.
Please don't leave my life.
She smiled and whispers.
"You can't control love."
Just need to make the days and the nights of love to last forever.
These are the miracles for the lucky and the foolish.

                                Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

Three short poems. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

WOW. pure Genius if I must
say so beautiful so romantic.


Thank you for sharing. blessings. Kindred poet

I love this not one but we get 3
poems that's a treat.



Open doors
I love this one so romantic and mysterious
very nice.


Open the shades wide.
Lite the incense candles of lavender and sweet wild flowers.


Open the shades wide.
Lite the incense candles of lavender and sweet wild flowers.
Don't be afraid of the dark and lonely nights.
We are just flesh and bones.
Needing to dance into the light.

Dead Poets

Dead Poet's don't complain.
Ancient writers rejoice.

I feel they are honored to have
there work so admired.











Bare feet


You are the sun, the moon. You are my hope and joy.
Please don't leave my life.
She smiled and whispers.
"You can't control love."


True you can't tell the heart
to love either I never trust
my heart as it deceives us
and is a foolish thing to follow
so I more so listen when go put some
thing upon my heart and I listen to him
also.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome. blessings. Kindred poet

[Pax]

Open Doors

~ it gives a good feeling of two soul sharing both openness and love to each others arm. Letting the darkness out of the way, bring the light of love along, to give way for a good start of the new day. And then you are not so alone anymore.


Dead Poets

~ as the title stands, it is as profound as far as I remember. For me this second verse simply means our words lives on in the pages of literature, history or simply it is our legacy.

Bare feet

~ "You can't control love.", so true, love will always be there. Forever is not about something that will last with infinite days, but it is sometime of the moment that seems to last forever. That particular moment that is worth everything to you. it is the feelings that simply last through time...

a very beautiful piece my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pax. I'm trying to be less epic. We are always learning and trying to improve.

[Chris]

I felt each of the three. The last one touched memories.

Take care,
Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Chris. Just writing words down late into the night.

[Chris]

Isn't that what we all do? Sometimes the writing helps and sometimes its the clarity of our thinking...

[Blue]

You are a wonderful poet with the gift of words, Coyote. This is pure brilliance. I wish you more ink to your pen and more papers to write on. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for your kind words. They are greatly appreciated.

[Zahra]

Great poetry here, amazingly done. Thanks for sharing

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we should be more like the dead poets...we complain way too much...maybe that is why dead poets get the attention, live ones don't get nearly as much.

i really like the first piece...two hearts that have been through so much find solace in the love for each other...one that is safe and comforting.

nicely done...all three, John..

jacob

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jacob for reading and the kind words. I'm trying to be less epic. People are afraid of prose poetry and story.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very nice, three meanings, three lessons, and all three works of art.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the kind words.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome…Just speaking the truth

[Cryingkate]

I can't wait till the sun moves off my computer screen to read these. grrr

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. Just trying to write less epic poetry.

[Stephen]

Here I come to read words again, "You can't control!" Very True!

You've to replace the line : "Be not afraid of the dark and lonely nights." with "DON'T be not afraid of the dark and lonely nights."

And there's one more minor error in the line : "She was pretty as a Angel in her white Summer dress."
Replace it with : "She was pretty as AN Angel in her white Summer dress." Overall is good!
Nice poem, the 3 poems I read in a one poetry! Sounds good! Last one "Bare feet" poem's what all the most I loved not because there you mentioned the beauty of an angel but when that angel whispered in your ear that "You can't control love!" Lol!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Stephen for the help and reading. I do appreciate.