Sacred places and sweet dreams

Memories are like good red wine. Become more valuable with time and separation.

    Sacred places and sweet dreams


She traced my skin with soft hands and tender touch.
 She had locked the doors and lite the incense candles of the free wildflowers.
She created a radiance of paradise where frail love can become wild and free.

Her surging want increased as she added sweet kiss and embrace.
She rubbed oil of lavender, slowly moving her hands and body over my resting body.
I had promised not to move till she was complete in her task.
Her warm skin against my skin awoke my tamed and controlled heart.
She move her breast across my body allowing her long blond hair to cover my face and chest. Her fragrance of fresh flowers in her hair made me want to pull her near.

She whispered to me. "Your time shall come my love. We have time to savor the kiss, the gentle touch  and find the secret places reserved for lovers unafraid of the kind night."

The night hours are upon two bodies running free and wild in the want and need of love. Lover's love, dreamer dream.  They try to find peace in the slumber of two restless hearts learning to become one.

                               Coyote/John Castellenas


  

Author's Note

A new poem. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Cryingkate]

I think this write is illegal Coyote.!

I do believe they call this "Breathless Heartknapping."

It is illegal to steal someones breath and heart at the same time.
Leaving them lying in a helpless state frozen in your words,
This could also be considered wreckless endangerment.

Hmm.. :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. You are always very kind and sweet.

[Cryingkate]

:-) ............

[Traci]

The title captured my attention...love it, and it truly exemplifies the deep intensity of the poem. Beautiful words that linger in the heart and soul.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Traci for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Barbara Walker]

A beautiful story told in poetic form. Love the title!

[Coyote Poetry]

I have been reading Virgil, Dante, John Dryden and Jack London lately. I recommend the book "When Gods laugh." It gave me motivation to write 40 new poems. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Barbara Walker]

I will get the book!

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to find. I had to order from the bookstore a fresh copy. I got lucky and found the book at a library boom sale, on first copyright. I ordered a new one so I could keep the original book in good shape.

[zephyr]

What tremendously beautiful and sensual poem. The moments of life.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sarah. Old memories become gold with time.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Coyote, this is outstanding. You touch my heart each time I read your work. Thank you for sharing your heart and soul. You are amazing!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Becky for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Becky C Strukamp]

The kind words are well deserved my friend. Will you be sending me some of your treasured poems for the book? I would love to include them.

[Coyote Poetry]

I send you a e-mail a month ago. I will re-check today.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Oh my I never received it. Sorry!!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Thank! I checked and do not see anything. I guess the internet is not a perfect science. I will look forward to receivng them.

[Emily]

1st stanza, 3rd line: created instead of create. 2nd stanza, 3rd line: should be promised instead of promise. 2nd stanza, last line: should be fragrance.
Other than that, it was a really immersive poem! Good job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the help and reading.

[An owl on the moon]

Always so much passion mingled with tender, beautiful glimpses of life.. recollections.. past reflections.. these moments still lingering in your heart and soul. So powerful.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Craig. I appreciate the comment.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Such tenderness and and adoration shine in this poem, you can not go wrong when appreciating the beauty and grace of a woman.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you kind friend for reading the poem. Between Dante, Virgil, London and Dryden. I'm back into my writing again.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome… glad to see you are finding the words, it is very liberating.