I have loved and I lost myself

A poem for love.

                                 I have loved and lost myself

Do you know how it feels to be upon a cloud? Laying with a true love. Knowing silky soft skin,  kissing and caressing  from  tender feet to perfect neck, shoulders and lips.

Love, my friend. No sweeter wine than a kind woman who willfully baring her body and soul as a precious gift to a lucky man. They leave men with sweet dreams and memories of real love.

I have suicide board the great seas, climbed to mountain peaks. The sea and the mountains could not equal the vision of a beautiful woman releasing a Summer dress, slowly removing undergarments and standing for the poor man to see. To be never forgotten.

Love needs to be devoured slowly. Lovely woman need to know she is wanted and she is the only one. The kisses need to linger into late night. The flesh demand payment and lovers love till two are content.

Beautiful woman told me. I have loved and lost myself. I told her she is the only one in my dreams and life.

  Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

A new poem. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Stephen]

Ist. Replace the line :- "Lovely woman NEED to know she is wanted and she is the only one" WITH "Lovely woman NEEDS to know she is wanted and she is the only one"

2nd. Replace the line :- "The FLESH demand payment and lovers love till two are content" WITH "The FLESHES demand payment and lovers love till two are content"

~~~ The rest of all is well penned ~~~ I enjoyed even I really smiled reading this piece. You make me chuckle but yeah, it`s true .. love makes you laugh and sad as well but it`s love which brings the whole world right in the palm of the hands if the love`s handled with faith and emotions because love`s meant to beloved all the time. Well done for the great write!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Stephen for reading and the help. I will fix now.

[Stephen]

My pleasure. You know what? I think, you`re a great writer around the world because I believe, you well express or tell your great story-lines through your words in a way a reader becomes eager to read your work all the day and it`s true because it happens to me many times~~ yeah.. after reading your writes, I observed that I become more eager to read your stuffs as I read once and this`s the thing makes you a great writer. I`ve seen that you`ve been writing since a long while ... and that`s very good but I think, Now .. the time`s coming to you ... the time to get published. You should now try to give a shot to your best works and try to get published ASAP because the life and the time never awaits for anyone, my friend. You`re simply a kind, great & of course, a very talented writer. I`m pleased to meet you!!

[sheilysoria]

I have read a few of your writings and I love this ine the most! I like the way you compare things. Great writer.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. You are very kind.

[John Anderson]

a fine poem cleverly written

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautifully penned and Romantic as always my poet friend.



I loved these stanza's lines.

Love needs to be devoured slowly. Lovely woman need to know she is wanted and she is the only one. The kisses need to linger into late night. The flesh demand payment and lovers love till two are content.



Thank you for this Romantic piece.


Blessings. kindred poet

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're quite welcome. it's my pleasure as always. blessings. kindred poet

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you John. I appreciate the comment.

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

Lovely new poem. Lots of love. Always written well my friend. I hope you have love in your life.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sarah. 20 years of marriage and holding on.

[~Sarah~ Idríel The Fair]

Wow that's great! =D Happy to hear!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love, my friend. No sweeter wine than a kind woman who willfully baring her body and soul as a precious gift to a lucky man.

I love that line and whole poem is truly a vision of how beautiful desire can be.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. Some visions cannot be forgotten.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome sir.

[00000000000000000000000..]

What matters most is what you gain in all right John, The suicide board I understand in the vast of giving. Awesome write:))))))))))))))

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. Suicide boarding the ocean was fun, but.

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Welcome:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) yea no need!

[WhenAllElseFails]

The poem is endearing. I like how it talks about love as a synonym of physical tension which nowadays is not much given a thought or two anymore. Beautiful! Thanks!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. New world learn too late. Love is rare and precious.

[Broken.buddy]

This piece has a metaphysical longing in its essence. Wonderful read. Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Manoj. Longing leave us wishing for a second dance.

[Pryde Foltz]

I have suicide board the great seas, climbed to mountain peaks. The sea and the mountains could not equal the vision of a beautiful woman releasing a Summer dress, slowly removing undergarments and standing for the poor man to see. To be never forgotten.

In those moments we come as close to heaven as the mind will allow. Deep and profound, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pryde. Some beauty cannot be forgotten.

[Pryde Foltz]

I hear you …. some masculine beauty too.