Can you see me?

All of us need to feel needed and wanted.

                               Can you see me?

1600 mile to Dallas, seemed like a million miles. I'm so alone. I have learnth to accept less.
I have learn. Dead love is no love.

I drink the bloody Mary with more vodka than tomato juice. I roll my cigarettes dreaming of your soft face and kind words.  I wonder if we are born to accept less?

I don't want to forget you and  I have wished upon the first and last star for someone to make me wild and crazy once again. I want to know the rapture of reluctant kiss devouring the nights and morning.

I want to fall into adrift in your eyes, your hands and your kiss. I wondered can you see me? Can you see what I need and want. Maybe we don't want enough or too much?

I wanted someone like you. Someone who makes me feel tomorrow will be okay. Someone who excites my soul and heart. Gifts of love are rare.

I wonder do I have anything left? Maybe too many shadows and the chaos in my mind. Maybe I'm blinded and  the veil of accepting less had capture me.

Sometime I dream I'm the Coyote. Running free and wild to his true love. Two lovers dancing bare and unafraid to the darkness of the night and the light of the day.

I see you. I hear you and I want to know you. I want us to undress and dance by the moonlight by the sea. Leave nothing hidden and be free to shred the skin of disappointment.
 
I love you beautiful Katie.

                             Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

A new poem. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

As for this line:

I wanted someone like you. Someone who make me feel tomorrow will be okay. Someone who excite my soul and heart. Gifts of love are rare.
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I wanted someone like you. Someone who makes me feel tomorrow will be okay. Someone who excite my soul and heart. Gifts of love are rare.
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as for that very minor "s" --- the endearment and dedication of this rings in...hope even with the miles away --- that words can touch those --- they are meant for a purpose...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Glen. I appreciate the kind words.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Too add...at least its not 10000 plus miles like --- I did for 3 years with my wife...now we are in one place...you're welcome...

[Coyote Poetry]

10,000 is a long way. Very hard to keep long range relationships alive.

[John Anderson]

I love the way you navigate complex emotions with such consummate skill...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you John. I appreciate the comment.

[MsJewel]

A beautiful poem of love and longing.
I wanted someone like you. Someone who makes me feel tomorrow will be okay. Someone who excites my soul and heart. Gifts of love are rare.

Such beautiful writing. You have touched my heart with this one.
:) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Julie. I appreciate your comments always.

[Jon Roggie]

A very touching write, one full of beauty and emotion.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jon. Good to have and hold dreams.

[Susie Q]

WOW. A lot of words of passion & love for beautiful Katie. Hold on to the dream, it may come true &
tomorrow will be okay! A Coyote running free & wild to his true love.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Susie. Sometime even the Coyote is locked in.

[Susie Q]

You are welcome. Sometimes for one reason or another there is a time when we are locked in.

[willweb]

This poem was so filled with love, desire and some personal doubt. But the beauty of it far surpasses the doubt. I really enjoyed this poem today.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

This is so beautiful and poetic! I'd imagine to make us all feel free as possible, to the point of experiencing unusually lovely perceptions. Once again, gorgeous work xx

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. Real love should have no limit.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

You're welcome.

[Stephen]

1st. Replace : "I have LEARN to accept less. I have LEARN" ... WITH "... I have LEARNT to accept less. I have LEARNT.

2nd. Replace : "Someone who MAKE me feel tomorrow will be okay. Someone who EXCITE my soul and heart" ... WITH " ... Someone who MAKES me feel tomorrow will be okay. Someone who EXCITES my soul and heart."

Reason :- You`re here yearning for having a love of special one/someone not from everyone which`s why I`ve replaced "Make" with "Makes" and "Excite" with "Excites"

Replace : "Maybe I'm blinded and the veil of accepting less had CAPTURE me" ... WITH "... Maybe I'm blinded and the veil of accepting less had CAPTURED me."

The rest of the piece`s well written. I enjoyed the theme of the write. It`s all based off your love life.

May you & your beautiful Katie live long!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Stephen for reading and the help.

[Sami Khalil]

A beautiful poem with great romantic flare. You have the gift of poetry and love too...:).................

[Coyote Poetry]

I have been reading the ancient writers. Dryden and Ben Jonson had given me positive motivation.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...:).....................

[IvorySunshine]

It is, as you have said, extremely hard to keep long distance relationships going. I love this, the longing to be with that special someone but not being able to. You have written of the longings of the heart well my friend. Great job

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I served 15 years in the Army. I learn hard to keep love and friendship alive. Everything and everyone changes.