My true love

Written in 1978-rewritten in 2014

                        My true love

The feeling of joy is you. I have been submerge in your sweet kiss and tender embrace. You taught me the fruit of love was colorful and worthwhile.

The touch of your slender fingers and your loving eyes had cause my dreams and hope to become free and wild like the untamed sea.

I have swam in the confined of your eyes. Ascending to new places and un-foretold  places where I dream of long nights and laying in our bed, blocking out the lights of the new day holding you tightly.

I know I'm the fortunate one. I put my hands through your auburn hair and I tell you.

You are my last love and my only true love. You have brought into the madness of love and forever I will fall adrift in your memory. Forever remembering the first kiss and last sweet kiss. 

                                Coyote/John Castellenas
                                Written in 1979/rewritten in 2014

Author's Note

A new poem. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

WOW my friend Truly very sweet and Romantic.


I loved these stanza's lines so beautiful.


The feeling of joy is you. I have been submerge in your sweet kiss and tender embrace. You taught me the fruit of love was colorful and worthwhile.


You are my last love and my only true love. You have brought into the madness of love and forever I will fall adrift in your memory. Forever remembering the first kiss and last sweet kiss.



maybe you can Inspire me with your writes today I need a little of that spark
but I won't force it to come about. :)


Blessings. kindred poet

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kindred poet. I appreciate the comment.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet

[Cryingkate]

The essence of the Love energy is captured well in this.
Very Beautiful as always.....

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I was tire today. So I'm reading my 40 year old journals. This poem and the poem for grandfather were hidden diamonds in the book.

[AprilRN1210]

Very sweet and romantic....
(I would change the tense in the second line to match the rest of the piece.. "the touch of your slender fingers and your loving eyes cause(d) my dreams and hope(s) to become free and wild like the untamed sea")
and also the "confined of your eyes" to "confines of your eyes"... otherwise flawless, and beautifully moving... I enjoyed it:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the help. I do appreciate.

[AprilRN1210]

You're very welcome, was my pleasure... It is beautiful.

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Wow! This is a great poem Coyote! Very beautiful, honest, and filled with emotions. I can feel the love. Great job

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Michael. I was digging out the old poetry. This poem jump out.

[John Anderson]

This is very beautifully expressed and well written. I enjoyed it very much

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you John. I like my old poetry the best. More direct and honest.