We are standing on a dangerous edge. Our sweet love had turned cold. You do not know what to do. Fight for our love or take flight.
I know the real truth. When you are gone from me. I won't know the sunshine of your beautiful face. I will miss you hellos and sweet kiss. I know I wasted love and energy on useless things. I know you are my everything and I'm just a destitute man needing your caress.
Once we held unbounded love and we traveled into unchartered territories. Our young eyes became old. You whispered. Johnnie, are you with me? Are you going to be part of my life? You must come back to where we knew love and laughter. We have not surpassed the final ending. Love on a thread is balanced on the promises of love and kindness kept.
I looked at sad brown eyes and I fell to the ground and laid my head into her lap. I wrapped my arms around her and I whispered. I remember when your brown eyes shined for me. You made me crazy and I yearn for your kiss and embrace as soon as I left you. The allure of your face waiting for me made my life okay. I need you my love. If I lose you. A slice of me will be gone. The best part.
Sweet woman pondered my words. She caressed my hair and face and told me. How long can we hold madness in love? Is loving worth the rewards of bleeding, screaming and disappointment? Are you here or somewhere else? If you are here. I will stay.
"What peace can be, where both to one pretend." Dryden
"Can life be a blessing, or worth the possessing, can life be a blessing if love were away." Dryden
I stood up and brought her near. I told her, love can be fickle and false. I do know that you are my blessing . I would beg and plead to keep you near. You are my sacred and wonderful dream. I want us to try.
"Neglected love is dying love. Dying love seldom can transcend to the surface again." Dryden
She smiled and told me. Tonight we will play rummy upon our bed. Drink some good wine and become friends again. I will sing to you and we will find poetry for the heart. I love you Johnnie.
Two people found tears and hope. Love lost can be found when two hearts dig deep and don't forget the simple gifts of love. Long walks, long talks, keep the passion alive and know.
Love is rare and so sweet. Coyote/John Castellenas
i got a beautiful message out of your poem. so poem will rply in poem -" hold my hand,
the difficulties will fade away,
for it have to,
cuz our love is stronger,
light will peep from the darkness, i believe,
for our love is true,
the God had made it."
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11 Years Ago
Your words true and beautiful. Thank you for reading and the comment.
What a breathtaking poem. Such a beautiful and true message of love. My heart was held by every line. Especially on the line, "Love lost can be found when two hearts dig deep". Lovely. Thank you for sharing.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you Alejandra. I appreciate the positive comment.
i got a beautiful message out of your poem. so poem will rply in poem -" hold my hand,
the difficulties will fade away,
for it have to,
cuz our love is stronger,
light will peep from the darkness, i believe,
for our love is true,
the God had made it."
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Your words true and beautiful. Thank you for reading and the comment.
That is such a beautiful and touching piece. It is rare and brilliantly put delicately. I really loved it Coyote
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11 Years Ago
Thank you Sindu. I appreciate the comment. I enjoyed your poetry also and I will return and read mor.. read moreThank you Sindu. I appreciate the comment. I enjoyed your poetry also and I will return and read more later.
11 Years Ago
Welcome. And thanks too. I really do love your reviews when you visit.
If I lose you. A slice of me will be gone. The best part.
So touching and it is such a reminder that love, while a powerful chemical reaction can fade, and it takes work to keep that fire going strong! Another great piece!
Love is special as you wrote it in this poem! Love is hard to find, when two people find it they need to treat it special and hold on to it! This was beautifully written, Coyote.
Thanks for writing Coyote I really enjoyed reading this, I have loved and lost and now travel in unchartered territories keep writing my friend this one hit home.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you Deepwater. I hope to keep writing for a long time.
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