Attempt at nine letter poetry.

Hard to create powerful poetry using minimum words.

                                Kiss
Elixir of kiss.
Love was young.
You were perfect.


                             Mistress
Mistress love.
Veil revealed.
Perfection remembered.


                              Vision
Noble vision.
Delicious nymph.
Treasured memory.


                              Harmony

Harming of dance.
Amorous emotion alive.
Blushing beauty delight.

                             Body

Fragrant of body.
Tracing of skin.
Falling into perfection.


                                   Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

New poetry. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Zahra]

Vision
Noble vision.
Delicious nymph.
Treasured memory.

beautiful. beauty in brevity

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the positive comment.

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm down with the delicious nymphs. Good one Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for stopping by and reading.

[Fran Marie]

Fragrant of body.
Tracing of skin.
Falling into perfection.

I like this a lot ..especially the last one on body...the entire piece
describes so much, with so little words.. a great nine word versed poem here

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Fran. The epic Poet trying to be different.

[Lauriegirl]

This was a really good, experimental piece. I'm very impressed. This has to be my favourite piece of yours yet

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lauriegirl. I'm trying to be less epic. Two publishers wanted to publish me. They told me too bad I wasn't born 500 years ago. Epic poetry sold then. I'm waiting. Testing different style and more story.

[Matching Socks]

You did this so perfectly John.
My turn to thank you for the excellent poetry.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ana. I needed to challenge myself.

[Matching Socks]

Challenge aced...