Delicate wings

Some people are more tender than others

                             Delicate wings

Beautiful Liz. Allowed me in.
Her word and beauty memorized me.
Woman who strip down their true cover and show you what is
hidden beneath clothing and fear.
They are rare and delicate ladies.

Many skeletons for us to hide.
Few perfect people.
We are just flesh and bone trying to understand our life and journey.
All of us cling to thing lost and cannot be found.

First kiss, first love embrace and the first dance.
They are  printed into our mind and heart.
It is a sad world dear Liz.
Hard to forget bad places and things.
I believe the hard places teach us to appreciate the good places today.

When I see you. I saw delicate wings struggling to fly.
I see beauty bursting out and I know.
You will be okay. If you need a friend to listen.
Johnnie can be found.

We are fragments of many things dear friend.
Live and learn. Dance and sing. Laugh and cry.
Make the world know you are alive.

Hard to be a perfect Angel. We must do our best.

                         Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

Just words. I hope you like.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful Liz. Allowed me in.
Her word and beauty memorized me.
Woman who strip down their true cover and show you what is
hidden beneath clothing and fear.
They are rare and delicate ladies.


When I see you. I saw delicate wings struggling to fly.
I see beauty bursting out and I know.
You will be okay. If you need a friend to listen.
Johnnie can be found.



Beautiful how very sweet
I see the kindness in this write.


Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.


Take care. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Benita. Just words and thoughts for a friend. Who needed them.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome. well that is nice :)

[gonelikeafreightrain]

I don't believe these are just words, because they speak so loud and wish to be noticed by the reader. Beautiful Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

I write on many sites. Sometime we write poetry to repair someone who need words and kindness. This poem did have a reason. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[hardeep sabharwal]

just words!! its beautiful,, and you have done a great job here :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

"When I see you. I saw delicate wings struggling to fly.
I see beauty bursting out and I know.
You will be okay. If you need a friend to listen.

We are fragments of many things dear friend.
Live and learn. Dance and sing. Laugh and cry.
Make the world know you are alive."

Sometimes it feels its hard to get wings that will
carry you when storm hits. You will need a friend, family,
anybody who will believe in you.

Thanks for sharing!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sarah for reading and the positive comment. We under-rate friendship. All of us need someone to tell us. You will be okay.

[~Sarah~ Idríel The Fair]

Just making me smile. :)

[Purplerose]

Just words? No Sir.....this is beautiful romance and reality of life wrapped up in one. Enjoyed! Xo :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I believe words can change the world.

[Purplerose]

So do I.....one heart at a time. :)

[Briana O'Connor]

Beautiful sentiment! I love the way you addressed the woman in the story. It was mesmerizing seeing the conversation unfold. It was as if you were writing a love letter or watching over her from afar. There was a couple words that should have an (s) on the end and some punctuation errors, however I still enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and I will do a re-read.

[gabrielle]

The innocents are the most vulnerable...But they needed to experience life on their own as this will strengthen their wings...There's so much gentleness in your words, CP. VEry moving piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Gabrielle for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, we are all made up of the places we have been and the people we have met. We are bits and pieces like a mosaic artwork. Impossible to be perfect. We all have to do the best we can. For someone to trust you enough to let you in to see all those bits and pieces is very special. Another wonderful story told here, John. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lydia. Lately been meeting new writers. We need to read and find reasons to write. Make us better I hope.

[Pax]

We are fragments of many things dear friend.
Live and learn. Dance and sing. Laugh and cry.
Make the world know you are alive.

ahh, so good, to feel those all, it makes us more human, to just live. When we fly, our wings are as delicate as we glide. Its the beauty on how we survive. Life is full of strife, but it doesn't stop us from living life as what we should be... great piece my friend...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pax. I appreciate the comment.

[Pax]

you're welcome :)