A thousand kisses deep. Part two

Kisses my friend. Real gold of a life.

     

                              A thousand kisses deep

The doors are locked and window block by the satin curtains.
We infuse our bodies freely and wildly.
We tossed the silk sheets upon the cold floor.
 We are sharing sweet red wine and warm kisses.

Promises not made. Promises not broken.
We have fake face and real want.

I told you. Beautiful lady. You are too good to me.
Too kind to a traveler with no final destination.

Laughing eyes angels turned to me.
She whispered. Few people see us truly nude and  free.
The irony of love is cold and love will find a deadly ending.
I know my sweetheart. We need to dance nude by the lights of the candles
and be a  thousand kisses deep into the want of the heart.

I brought her near. I told her.
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I love you. I love you.
I need you near.
Broken day bring hopeful night.
Being seduced by blue eyes and skin that smell like the sea and the wildflowers.
I want to be here. You color my life with brightness and hope.

Small fires can expand.
Need change and a thousand kisses deep in the emotion of joy and dance.
We have adjoined two people by the light of the Fall moon.
Please kind night. Never end.
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Pretty lady stood up. Took my hands and brought me near.
She opened the curtains. We allow the moon and the stars to watch
two people celebrating the gift of dance, laughter and a moment of peace.

                        Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

Just words. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

You know you're actually good at writing Erotica? Most Erotica written by men on this site pretty much blows.
Women seem to be better at it generally speaking. Jack was good at it but he's gone now so you have to write non-retarded male erotic poems. Can you, Coyote poetry, hold up to the challenge? I think so.

[Coyote Poetry]

I walk the edge on erotic. I agree with you. Woman can write erotic. Few men can. Was one man on this site a long time ago. He wrote detailed tales. I will try. Us men think erotic is. Slap the butt, kiss on lips and jump in the hay. Thank you my friend for the comment.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's about right

[Colton Warr]

This is quite the breath taking piece, my friend! It took me away to a different place as I read it. I love it. The emotion cuts deep. This is more than just words, this is pieces of your heart. It's beautiful. Thanks for writing this!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Colton. I appreciate the comment.

[Lyn Anderson]

Just words. Just words that sweep us away and take us into a special world to which you hold the key.:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Leonard Cohen make the words flow. Thank you for reading and the comment. I appreciate you stopping by.

[Lyn Anderson]

Of course he does, and it makes sense that his words so resonate with you. Your styles have a lot in common.

[Coyote Poetry]

He had been a teacher since I was introduced to him by German friends in 1976. I saw him in concert twice in Europe 1978-1979. He played a four hour concerts.

[Fran Marie]

A beautiful romantic piece ..with a touch of soft eroticism entwined through out to stir the imagination...Sweet.!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Fran. Leonard Cohen song gave me some positive motivation.

[icelandicblue]

This is very romantic and I think you have done a great job with the subject. You've kept it classy with a twist of edge.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I believe the writer need to make the reader to use their imagination.

[Purplerose]

This is a brilliant write. It swept my emotions as I read thru it. Beautiful moment of sharing between two people that you have shared with us. Enjoyed! Xo :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. Leonard Cohen songs give me reasons to write.

[Purplerose]

Great song.....great write. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

He is the Poet of the song. I have been listening to his music since 1976.

[Purplerose]

I might just have to listen to him more. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

He will give you reasons to write. He had many poetry books.

[Purplerose]

I will for sure check more of his work out. I'm glad you shared this piece. :)

[Wórdsmíth]

The ending`s quiet fascinating itself, makes me smile. Nice imagery as always. Your love for your beautiful wife`s unique & one of a kind itself that`s even reflecting through your pieces. Keep on!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. Old poetry is about different places and people. Good to get drunk with love when we are young.