Always on my mind

Good song lead to good memory.

                         Always on my mind

Love alive or concealed.

Leave us wishing for things lost.

Beautiful faces and places leave us yearning for things we cannot have.

I remember you. Your long and sweet kisses left me breathless and wanting more.

Your skin smelling of the summer flowers and the softness of your warm body against me.

Left me with wishes for days of Summer wine and deep kisses.

You are always on my mind my dear lover.

You made me yearn for your never ending love and

for nights to turn into days in the splendor of wild and true love.

                  Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

A new poem. Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[M.A.Rathore]

Though I am not a great poet and writer yet I feel something vibrent towards the poetic dishes when served here right now in front of me . By going through your poem I felt that I am too feel like that you.

Love alive or concealed.
Leave us wishing for things lost.
Beautiful faces and places leave us yearning for things we cannot have.

Most contemplative beginning of your poem telling us whether we can expose or conceal the feelings of love, the past memories do shake us leaving us in a deep yearning for unfulfilled desires in love.

I remember you. Your long and sweet kisses left me breathless and wanting more.

These sensuous image bring us to the cozy feeling in the company of beloved.Still the impact is indelible.

Your skin smelling of the summer flowers and the softness of your warm body against me.

Nicely painted the picture of summer's fragrance metaphorically drawn.

Left me with wishes for days of Summer wine and deep kisses.

Again some more lovely feelings are felt in making marry the rest of the day.


You are always on my mind my dear lover.
You made me yearn for you never ending love and
for nights to turn into days in the splendor of wild and true love.

And this yearning increases deeply turning nights into days and feeling splendor of wildness of happiest moment with the love.

At last I just loved and enjoyed this piece very much. Hope all is fine.
-M.A.Rathore

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[M.A.Rathore]

Thanks for you who composed this beautiful verse worthy to praise..It's my pleasure being with your words...

[Peyton]

I'm in love with this poem. "Beautiful faces and places leave us yearning for things we cannot have."- this line is so perfect

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Peyton. I appreciate the comment.

[ssstikdownn]

I love it...It kind of made me think of an ex boyfriend of mines. This poem was beautifully written, it was excellent!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Madame Murrell. I appreciate the comment.

[K.N. Thorn]

A romantic but simple poem it still has complexity and depth. I enjoyed your metaphors and I like how you posted the video of the song that inspired your work. Good job. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. Good music make us dream, hope and write.

[K.N. Thorn]

Indeed it does :) I also feel that way about art :)

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

The diction is straight and the point. Your first two words struck. There is always a time we feel empty and longing for loved ones. Well written.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[The Black Warrior]

This is beautiful, so romantic

my fav. lines

You are always on my mind my dear lover.

You made me yearn for your never ending love and

for nights to turn into days in the splendor of wild and true love

Thank you for sharing!

~Suk

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Suk. If we are lucky. love is life. Life is love.

[ayesha gupta]

nice and simple words. i liked reading it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Sophy Freebirds]

I really liked this poem. Love though concealed or alive you are still on my mind. Your words always form a mantra so subtly that the reader becomes so engrossed. Lovely feel to this poem is just an added charm :) beautiful piece

~Sophy

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sophy. I appreciate the comment.

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

Sweet sweet words. Thanks for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sarah for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[priya]

So beautifully expressed, its a pleasure reading such wonderful poems..
on a side note, i wish to correct a mistake..in the second last line, i suppose its "your" instead of "you".. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the help. I truly appreciate.

[periwinkle]

You got a great piece here. Your words are overflowing with intricacy of love. Keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.