My little one

Just words.

                       My little one
Love, Amie, love.
Five foot tall, hair of strawberry red.
Sweet smile that can steal your heart.

I have contemplated the sweetness of your kiss.
The warmth and safeness of your embrace.

Your unseen beauty had provoked silent wishes to a
decaying man.

My little one.
My secret celestial fire.
I hope you have descended to the melody of hope and calm.

The music of humanity is hard to know and grasp.

Beautiful Amie.
Dance on quiet beaches.
Sing songs to the sleeping Gods.
Please be the noble beauty you can be.

                          Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

A new poem. I hope you like.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

"just words" can touch, inspire, motivate, encourage, empower... to look deeper within someone and see the true beauty and let them know what you see, can make a huge difference in someone's life.. this is gentle, moving, and holds such beautiful sentiment.. "celestial fire".. I love that!.. (I've always secretly wished for red hair).. my grandma's is red, my mom's is red, and mine is black..
I always love the tender tone in which you enchant your readers with. lovely as always...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Poet. I appreciate the comment.

[Beccy]

Bridging the distance with beautiful and uplifting words.

How lovely this is.

Beccy.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Beccy. I appreciate the comment.

[Lyn Anderson]

This speaks of love and memory and awareness of self and the ones we leave behind, but never in our hearts.

[Coyote Poetry]

I wrote for a sad Poet who needed positive words. It is sad when few people are kind to us. All of us need kind words. Thank you dear Poet for reading and the comment.
Coyote

[Eleanor]

You showed that poetry certainly can create wonders!
There's so much emotion and love in this. I really liked this poem.
Would definitely read more by you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. Words should make us think and if we are lucky. Learn something.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

My favorite stanza's lines here my friend.

My little one.
My secret celestial fire.
I hope you have descended to the melody of hope and calm.



Sounds like a Irish Beauty thank you for
sharing and for your kind review and comments
left on my page.



Stay warm and safe this cold
autumn season it may snow here
weather men has said and it has gotten
cooler and then may warm back up have a
blessed Week.



Blessings. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

Mighty cold in Michigan. Thank you for reading and the comment my dear friend.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome. :) has it snowed there yet or is it Just very chilly over in your part

[Fran Marie]

this poem is a most endearing and loving piece of fine poetry..

quite nicely done!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Fran. I appreciate the comment.

[Luna]

Lovely writing.. I liked it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Luna. I appreciate the comment.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Very nice old friend. Just wanted you to know I dropped by. Blessings.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Fabian.

[Sagar Waingankar]

Nice write Coyote. "Your unseen beauty had provoked silent wishes to a decaying man" I'm still thinking about the expressions, emotions felt here, what made the author to write such a puzzle, such wonderful words which stores a magic in this whole sentence!

Poetry is indeed a profound art form to express and this poem means it. Keep sharing, hope to hear more from you!

[Coyote Poetry]

Old writer had positive motivation from writers in far away places. Sometime distance is safety. Thank you for reading the positive comment.

[Barbara Walker]

I love that line-"my secret celestial fire"! In the fourth stanza, did you mean "calm?" As written, it's clam and I just can't see you meaning that word! A very nice write!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you reading and the help. I do appreciate dear friend.