The old poet sang a lullaby. Sensual woman whispered to me once. Come live with me and be my lover. I will be your salvation and you will be my rock to keep me steady.
Beautiful lady ambushed my heart and I learn her appetite for kisses and embrace. Her charm and sovereign eyes made me blind and with the wishes for more.
Real life lullabies rarely are perceived till too late. Our heart and mind turn, turn and turn some more.
Love demand payment. The chronicle of an forever love is like a willow tree. We must be willing to flex and bend like free branches to keep the sovereign eyes, bright, content and near.
Love bold, love behold, love dwell where two people hold tightly when the storms of life is at hand.
Love demand payment.
The chronicle of an forever love is like a willow tree.
We must be willing to flex and bend like free branches to keep the sovereign eyes,
bright, content and near.
You have spoken truly wise word here, my friend. It might be said that a love that demands payment is no love at all.
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11 Years Ago
You are right. Thank you for reading and the comment.
Your writing is really mesmerizing in so many ways. This awareness, and understanding of our need for human companionship yet accepting its transient nature in one's life.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you. The old song made me think and write. I love Judy Collin voice. I appreciate the comment.. read moreThank you. The old song made me think and write. I love Judy Collin voice. I appreciate the comment dear friend.
Love demands payment.
True! Nothing comes without a price.
But its not money. Love just needs time, care and trust :) but people don't understand that.
Hope they understand soon.
A great poem :)
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11 Years Ago
Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Love can be difficult and painful. People forget this and bail when s**t gets rough. Find someone who can stick it out when you crash land. That would be a beautiful thing
A most telling and witty piece that lays bare those nonsense in descriptive fervour, well done, great read.
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11 Years Ago
Old music make us write. The good songs will always stay the good songs. Thank you for reading my wo.. read moreOld music make us write. The good songs will always stay the good songs. Thank you for reading my words. I appreciate.
Love demand payment.
The chronicle of an forever love is like a willow tree.
We must be willing to flex and bend like free branches to keep the sovereign eyes,
bright, content and near.
You have spoken truly wise word here, my friend. It might be said that a love that demands payment is no love at all.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
You are right. Thank you for reading and the comment.
This is really a well-knit poem with some rhythemic qualities of lullbay. I love it for the message and structual qualities yet needs some edit on computer with length of every rhymed lines.....Thanks sharing this lovely piece..
Have a nice time!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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