Dance with my daughter again

A beautiful song.

                                   Dance with daughter

Old man remember. Little girls will become young woman. His little girl is tall and beautiful.
One she waited for him. Needed a ride, a day at the park and his kind voice to tell her.
She would be okay.








Daddy baby girl is off and running.

Old men, they  pray and wish. Their children are safe and sound. Today the good days are remembered and the hope for more good days are wanted.

                  Dance with daughter

In a old dream we danced at your second grade dance.
I danced with you.
You were content. I could come to the father and daughter dance.
I was tired and today.
It is one of my best days of my life.
To dance with daughter
To see her smile and content.
A father's hope.
                    Coyote/John

Author's Note

A new poem. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

So is the beautiful young lady with the strawberry
red hair is this your daughter beautiful young woman.



I wouldn't know what it felt like I never
danced with my daddy :(


But thank you for sharing I guess that's
why I hurt so much when others had what
I didn't but it was meant to happen my grandpa
replaced my dad but I still long for him even
though I forgave him it is a pain that never
leave as there was some things that didn't happen
like he never gave me away or walked me down the aisle.



That is why I've always felt more comfortable
around men older then me if they are a father figure
makes me feel I had one and I have some in my life that
have adopted me like their own family
other then my Father in law I am the daughter he's never had
and I won't speak of what his is like nothing like though
she was from his first marriage.



But thank you for this lovely poem
it was simply beautiful I have only imagined
and dreamed of dancing with my dad and him
being saved and loving and caring
for me as a father should had his love for a while
then I lost it to the Devil juice I still have hope god
will save his soul I've been fighting with the devil as
I am praying for me husbands soul and they devil knows
he sees me as a threat and I will not stop intercession
praying for his soul and others the devil is trying to take
away form me it has happened before and I am feed up
with it.



Thank you for sharing and your
kind review and comments you left
on my page.


God bless. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment dear friend.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome. Thank you for sharing my friend. Benita

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

A very touch full and beautiful poem. Amazingly emotional and creative. :-)

Kaze~

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Katherine. Last baby girl went off to college. I got older.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

You are very welcome. :-)

[June Fowler]

beautiful. My husband does looks upto his daughters and loves the youngest one soo much coz she has stood by him in his time of troubles and trials. Gus all fathers love their daughters more than anything in the world. I beet u too !

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you June.You are right. Always worry and concern for the girls.

[June Fowler]

Nice to hear from u! thanks.

[The Black Warrior]

Very touchy, so beautiful, and elegant...having a father's/daughter dance is just magical. well I can't really talk with experience because I haven't really dance with my father... yet, maybe when I get married. and that is when I turn 40... I am only 20 now. LOL but anyways your poem is very lovely and close to your heart!

thank you for sharing :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Suk. The simple act of kind words and a smile. Leave us with memories of being loved and cared for.

[The Black Warrior]

That is very true! Thank you for sharing your beautiful work :)

[Heather]

Oh my goodness! Such an amazing story like poem! Brought me to tears... Just wow.. Please please keep writing!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Heather. I appreciate the comment.

[Zakari Schmidt]

Such heartfelt sentiment delivered throughout your poem sir, I think it's beautiful. I imagined myself at such a dance after reading, I hope to have children someday. Thanks for sharing!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Zackary. Kids give us reasons to live when we do not have.

[MsJewel]

There is nothing like the bond between a father and his daughter. I read your poem with tears in my eyes...remembering my father - and how much I miss him. He will always be my knight, my prince, my hero. Your poem is heartfelt and lovely.

:) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Julie. A parent love is never forgotten. Just passed on to the next generation. We hope.