Two short poems

Just words. I hope you enjoy.

                                 Lingering

I remember you.
Those lingering kisses and
your silken tender skin against me.
Your love was holy and sweet.




                                Cherish


The aroma of Summer flowers upon your skin.
Your perfect tan legs across my lap.
Your arms holding me tightly in a perfect embrace.
These are cherish places captured by my heart.

                       Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

Trying to be less epic. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Stonz P.]

Oh my, such beautiful imagery in the two poems and the emotion of loss layered in between. I am so glad you visited my profile. And please Sir, how could you try to leave us bereft of your epicness. It would indeed be our loss..
Thank you so much for sharing this beauty.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. Don't worry. I can't stop being the epic Poet. I do appreciate the comment.

[Magnus]

Love the two pieces especially Cherish it enticed me! Looking forward to more short piece I can not add anything to both pieces they are complete themselves...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Magnus. I appreciate the comment.

[Magnus]

I am yet to review you other work so don't thank me yet! Because am going to be tough on you!!!! (Wink)(kiddin) lol you're welcome

[armin]

Nice work coyote. The second one was really good than the first. Emotions really flowed out.
Sweet and romantic.
Keep writing.
Have a nice time.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Armin. I appreciate the comment.

[Lyn Anderson]

Well less or more, you are always a pleasure to read.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I'm testing new ground.

[Moonie]

You know how to capture a moment really well. The details sharpen the image and the tenderness with which you write all your poems adds a romantic, surreal quality to it. Well done! :))

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Poet. I appreciate the comment.

[Lydia Shutter]

So very romantic. You have captured a lot of emotions in your words. You brought us to the scene. Your fond memories are vivid. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lydia. I appreciate the comment.

[Jen]

John, most of your poems are based on Love and the feelings of Beloved while departing or dying. And i say that they all are awesome.
This one is impressive short, full of fragrance and sweetness of love. Well, your emotions are in a sense, well portrayed. Ihope you write more of that stuff so that the readers like me can enjoy it more often.
Thank You again.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jahanvi. I appreciate the positive comment.

[Revolutionary]

his is the most tantilizing piece ever. Simply sexy without being dirty.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I believe better to use the imagination than to over write what is understood.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

They really make a short and nice read :-)
Cheers !

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kanchan. I appreciate the comment.

[blaqpearl]

two beautiful romantic poems...wonderful

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the positive comment. I do appreciate.