Wisp of the night

Used a paragraph by a Poet name Arsh. I hope you like.

Wisp of the night

What have we become. We have become stranger in the coldness of the lonely nights.
Holding on to what resembled love.


"but the wisp of night
I saw through love,
addressed the buoyancy of my heart
is faithless
& unrecognized the worth of it ---" Arsh

I know the color of love can change.
We were once a volcano of love. Needed kiss and touch in the day and the night.
Now we allowed words and bad actions to steal us away from the safeness of our paradise
we create and lost.

You told me once, us human beings will stop for a second. Just rest stops on the way of life. Just using time and one day we will escape.

Just like a wisp of the night. Sweet whispers of love tattoos on the heart and soul leaving us wishing for days we cannot find again.

One day we will not recognize the love shared. Our once captive love will become a prison. Love teaches us to weep, serene songs of joy and dance to the sweet words of love.

And can teach us like a wisp in the night. Love can be just shadows of people trying to find something that cannot be.

                               Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

Thank you Arsh for your motivation and thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Diana]

"And can teach us like a wisp in the night. Love can be just shadows of people trying to find something that cannot be." I feel as though so many people think/believe that love, and life and learning are these grand defined gestures, but I feel like your "wisp" concept is much more attune to the ways of nature. I am reminded of people's search for "forms" both within ourselves and others, and within the field of philosophy.

[Coyote Poetry]

A wisp of a memory. Something not forgotten and part of us. Wisp, a interesting word. Thank you Diana for reading and comment.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I know the color of love can change.
We were once a volcano of love. Needed kiss and touch in the day and the night.
Now we allowed words and bad actions to steal us away from the safeness of our paradise
we create and lost.



Beautiful my friend and thank you for stopping
by my page and for this lovely piece you've shared
and I will leave you more comments and reviews
for the other 3 poems you commented on.




God bless and thank you again my friend. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm catching up. Only 800 more read requests. I'm on vacation for two more days. I will try to cut the requests in half. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome thank you for sharing :)

[Black Cat Fever]

A very moving poem. Your words ring true of human life. How many stay their whole life with the one they love? Love is fleeting and burns out fast if it is not cared for in the good times so it can last through the hard times. An impressive write.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[Black Cat Fever]

You are very welcome.

[blaqpearl]

fantastic write
love needs tender care, it needs to be cultivated,watered
to keep the flame alive otherwise it burns out without you even realising it..
bravo!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Elie Marie]

I think I'm too heartbroken to not have these hit me hard. Great poem :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Elie Marie. I appreciate the comment.

[Matching Socks]

This is gorgeous coyote. Love needs nourishment like anything else. It will not thrive when left unattended.
Well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right dear Poet. A unkempt love will become a lonely place for two people. Thank you for reading and the comment dear friend.

[CommandoDolphin]

You were handling a silent truth in life. This writing is honest and doesn't try to hold your hand. That's the kind of thing I really enjoy. Well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love is a mystery, a miracle and a healer… so beautifully expressed.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Thank you for reading and the comment my friend.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are most welcome sir.

[Tiana]

I can totally relate to this wonderfully written poem, Coyote ...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Island Woman. I appreciate the comment.

[Arsh]

So... you made it.. didn't ya? I think, It was a lucky day to me when I wrote 'In A Clink'... wasn't it? Of course, it was. It's a pleasure to me that you read that this day & pulled something outta the grave of melancholy words with much depths. Thankfully, you make my day.

Really very glad to see you being inspired.

Ps. I must say, you're of your words.. aren't you? Of course, you are. That's all what a writer's 'bout. I appreciate the passion you've got 'bout the gallery of literacy.

[Coyote Poetry]

We need good words to motivate us. I have my Dryden, Ben Jonson and Jack London. When I need to write. They are my teachers.