The Summer dress

Beautiful photo made me wish for warm Summer days.

               (Thank you remenberaday from Tumblr for the photo)

 

The Summer dress

Long Summer days didn’t last long enough.

You in your Summer dress allowing the sun to kiss your perfect legs,

arms and skin.

I was jealous. Soft Summer breeze caressed your perfect body and

I could hold your hand and hope for the night to come.

Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

A new poem. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I think I have heard of men saying in songs
and writes saying they're Jealous of the
wind touching their body or even the clothes
that caress their bodies well very inspiring.



Now I see this very much many have said
my husband is a lucky man to have me and
I know that is a calmer way of being Jealous
but keeping the storm quiet :)




Thank you for the inspirations and the remembered
thoughts so many things ones say could give me a
inspired write and it has been said many a times that
my husband is a lucky man as in lucky to have me.





I really loved reading this makes
you wish summer was here :)

I just hope it isn't Brutal spring is
calm summer is very hot and brutal
here.



Thank you for sharing god bless. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

I need a warm day too. Thank you for stopping by dear friend.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome was a beautiful read thank you. Take care Benita

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... you have painted a
breath-taking poem of intricate
beauty being caressed by the sun
and wind. The delicacy of your
touch has captured moments of
tenderness. truly... Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pat. I appreciate the comment. I could use a Summer day.

[Myra]

Short and sensual! Very nice

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Myra. I appreciate the comment.

[Olumegbon]

Really nice, enjoyed every bit of it. Thanks for sharing with us.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I appreciate the positive words.

[Bonaventure Onuabuchi]

What is the significance of night here? Are you reall talking of a period?

[Coyote Poetry]

The night is when two people can find the private dance with safety. The poem is for the Summer and beautiful women missed.

[Anne Lutz]

I think this one is my favorite. I loved the sound and feeling it gave me! Thank you for posting.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Anne for reading and the comment. Beautiful places and Summer days. Never leave our heart and mind.

[~]

:) great juxtaposition.. you want the sun to show of her legs- hence the long summer days, but yet you long for the night, when she will be yours.

[Coyote Poetry]

Temptation make the final place more worthwhile. Good to test the mind and the heart. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Baby Ricochet]

Lovely romantic poem Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

You write differently, its unique though ad great to be different.
This was romantic, beautiful, and meaningful.
Great little piece :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm trying to write less epic. Good to experience with different style. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

No epic is good. Never change the way you write, its different in a good way. Its also who you are.
Your welcome :)