She closed her eyes

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                She closed her eyes

She closed her eyes. She was making wishes upon the first raising star. She was wandering to the wishing well. She kept her eyes tightly closed and she covered her mouth and made her wish. I went to her and asked what was her wish? She smiled and told me . My dear love. My wish came true. You are here.

                         Coyote/John Castellenas

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Author's Note

A short poem. I hope you like.

Reviews

[dan]

Coyote, I promised I'd visit so here I am, and I picked a fine place to start. Sometimes I think it's iron-clad that shorter poetry can pack a much larger wallop than lone pieces. This is such a beautiful accounting of unbridled love, sweet and soft as a whisper. People's wishes are a look into their psyches, and the wish in this piece is clear as a mountain stream. Fantastic write! take care...dan

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dan for reading and the comment.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

"My dear love. My wish came true. You are here."

Loved it! Sweet and heart-warming words to love! A beautiful write, Coyote! Thanks for sharing!☺

-Anjana

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Anjana for reading and the comment.

[TheLostMind]

" I went to her and asked what was her wish? She smiled and told me . My dear love. My wish came true. You are here." - very beautiful and touching.

Good write :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[TheLostMind]

You are welcome :)

[Valentine]

Short sweet and right to the point. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Friend. I'm trying to be less epic. Tumblr. request some words and lately giving me reasons to write.

[Valentine]

All inspiration is good. Kathie

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

This is so sweet :-)
Love the piece

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kanchan for reading and the comment.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

My pleasure Coyote.

[MsJewel]

I love it. So beautifully sweet and romantic. Wishes do come true...

:) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Julie. I appreciate the comment.

[Jamestown]

I love it! Fabulous my friend. Short, sweet and well written, thanks for sharing, PTL!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[Aaron Jinks]

I really like it, it was cute. A poem doesn't always need to be long to be deep. Good job. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. Most of my work is epic. I'm trying to be less epic and use art. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[katja]

these romantic vignettes of yours are a delight to the senses, Coyote...
... a lovely write, with rich imagery
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thank you for sharing

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Miss M. for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.