The dance

Dancing can take us to good places.

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                            The dance

We were once strangers .  Each of us  living in self made chaos.

The bickering song brought you near and our willingness and love for the

dance. Stole away regret and made our body and feet to become one. Our

once sedated life awoke when the music stole our thoughts and your body near

made me come alive as we moved as one,  in the contoured flow of the song.

                           Coyote/John Castellenas

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Author's Note

New words for a beautiful photo.

Reviews

[ANTO]

It is indeed a very evocative image Coyote, I can see how inspiration would have flowed from this but you, Sir are the other artist in this meeting of the arts and you have done yourself proud here. This positively simmers beneath the surface - as a fellow music fan I have to say I enjoyed this immensely my friend.
Loved "contoured flow of the song" - remarkable writing.
:))

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Anto for reading and the comment.

[andrew mitchell]

how beautiful the dance just like a poem

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Two people who can create movement and beauty. This is poetry.

[Amaris Grove]

As a dancer myself, I find a lot of meaning in this piece.

"We were once strangers. Each of us living in self made chaos."

I really like how you transitioned from the above line to fluidity and awakening from within. Excellent job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Amaris. I appreciate the comment.

[Astrid]

Elegant and graceful, just like a dance ~

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Astrid. Dance and good company. Best days of a life.

[Deboshmita]

I am a dancer and I know dance is such a beautiful art... Nice one...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. Best days in a life. Knowing dance and laughter.

[Fran Marie]

Dancing to the best of loves sweet song, entwined together as one ...romantic piece..well done

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. My best days were in Texas. Women asked you to dance and people knew the joy of good dance, drink and laughter. Thank you Fran for reading and the comment.

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Dance is an expression of emotion. Body poetry, if you will. Quite lovely

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Every dancer, anyone who has danced in pair at least once in their lives, can relate. Loved it, it made me recall the times I danced myself in pair, it's always a great experience, indeed.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Dancing allow us to become one without fear. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Geee... as i read the title i was very excited to read this.I must say i was not at all disappointed.Dance shows the emotions lf our soul.and sometimes helps us to pose carefree.Its the main source which brings two souls and bodies together.Such a heady combination.such a beautiful image :) makes me swoon.Thank you for sharing this lovely piece of art. *keep writing*

~Sophy

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sophy for reading and the comment. Dancing and song. Best days of a life.

[nazia]

This dance is so lyrical that it carries you away with the flow...beautifully written Sir. I really like the way you perceive and express even the tiniest of happenings in a wonderful way. Always a joy to read your work :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Nazia. I appreciate the comment.

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Short and sweet! I think of Leonard Cohen's "Dance me into the end of love." One suggestion though is to delete one of the "once" in the first sentence. It's just repeating the same meaning twice.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the help. I agree. Too many "Once".