The dance

Dancing can take us to good places.

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                            The dance

We were once strangers .  Each of us  living in self made chaos.

The bickering song brought you near and our willingness and love for the

dance. Stole away regret and made our body and feet to become one. Our

once sedated life awoke when the music stole our thoughts and your body near

made me come alive as we moved as one,  in the contoured flow of the song.

                           Coyote/John Castellenas

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Author's Note

New words for a beautiful photo.

Reviews

[ANTO]

It is indeed a very evocative image Coyote, I can see how inspiration would have flowed from this but you, Sir are the other artist in this meeting of the arts and you have done yourself proud here. This positively simmers beneath the surface - as a fellow music fan I have to say I enjoyed this immensely my friend.
Loved "contoured flow of the song" - remarkable writing.
:))

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Anto for reading and the comment.

[Helen Crutchett]

Enough said.....it was summed up in those few words so eloquently and orgeously stated. Flowing like a dance throughout you captured so well the thought.

Picture was superb.....love watching the TANGO....can't do it of course! I must visit Tumblr....they seem to have some awesome pics there!

Helena :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Tumblr is amazing. Also a lot of writers and poets. Thank you Helena for reading and the comment.

[Mai L Nissen]

This poem comes alive with a sincerity and an understated, slowly developed passion.
"Our once sedated life awoke when the music stole our thoughts and your body near
made me come alive as we moved as one, ..." Love this description, can feel it unfold right now in front of me...
"in the contoured flow of the song." - beautiful image, well written. I really enjoyed reading it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Mai. I appreciate the comment.