The dance

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                                   The dance

In the twilight of the day.

You can dance to Lana Del Rey.

You told me. Time to forget the day and welcome the night.

I watched you and you steal my eyes and thoughts dancing

in your cotton dress. I told you. All I can see is you.

                   Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

Good photo create good poetry.

Reviews

[Carrie.]

The punctuation was perfectly placed, it provided this piece with such oomph. I have a question about the second line, "You can dancing to Lana Del Rey". I found it unclear and a bit confusing. What am I missing here?

The picture is beautiful and the accompanying poem matches it move for move in it's dance.

-Carrie.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Carrie. I will repair now.

[Valentine]

Love the write and the picture. Nice write. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Valentine. Best days are when we are dancing.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful poem.



Thank you for sharing such a lovely
poem.



Thank you for stopping by my page.


god bless. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

I love your work and thank you for stopping by and reading my words.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you any time I love your work too. take care my friend.

[Madhu]

This is such a sweet poem. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Madhu. I appreciate the comment.

[Sheila Kline]

Oh yes, the photo was a wonderful inspiration for your poem...........such lovely words as your eyes and mind are mesmerized by the image of the dancing girl! You were caught!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sheila. I agree.