A thousand kisses deep

Good song help create poetry. A 1989 rewrite.

(A rewrite written in original form in 1989)
                                 
                            A thousand kisses deep

You told me in the journey into the midnight hours. Please write me some words of love. Sweet words to make feel complete. Give me the will, to be unafraid of tomorrow.

Your love is my energy to succeed and to reach for great dream. Before your gentle caress and our tangle web of our two hearts. I was depleted of envisaging tomorrow.  My hope and dreams were just echos in untold dreams.

I need your hands to fall into my hands and for us to fall together, becoming one in hope and in a celestial love. Unbreakable by the riddles of life. I walked alone till your laughter and kind words stole my heart. I need your teasing and pleasing deep into the the long night.

I want to thank you my love and  I promise you a thousand  kisses deep for you in the coldness of the Winter. A thousand more when the warm days of Spring appear. I cherish you my love. I can cry and talk of great dreams in your embrace. You are my only safest place I can find.

I held my lovely lady and  I told her. I want us to become old together, stand together and fight the world as one heart. I will love you till my last breath. You sweet kiss allowed me to to the know the utopia of great dreams and hope.

You are love and I'm nothing without you. I need to thank you, for allowing me into the protection of your soft and kind embrace. Teaching me to sing and write of a perfect and never ending love.

I love you.

                             Coyote/John Castellenas
                            Written in 1989/rewritten in 2015

Author's Note

Old poem with a re-write.

Reviews

[Sammi]

OMG!
What woman would not melt into your arms to receive such a profession of pure love of romantic tenderness and promise.
I simply adore these lines:

I want to thank you my love and I promise you a thousand kisses deep for you in the coldness of the Winter. A thousand more when the warm days of Spring appear. I cherish you my love. I can cry and talk of great dreams in your embrace. You are my only safest place I can find.

But I really enjoyed them all, John (much better than Coyote). :)
How happy I am to have found your wonderful poetry,
Sammi xx

The video took my breath!

[Coyote Poetry]

Leonard Cohen is the Poet of music. Thank you Sammi for reading and the comment.

[Sammi]

XOX — sweet pleasure, John.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Romance at its best!

Is there a sequel? :)

Did you grow old together?

[Coyote Poetry]

I wish it did. War and life separated us. But I write a 100,000 words for her. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Wow......I can see that as an opening sentence for a "war love story"........

"We found love, just in time, and I so wished it could last a life time, but war, and life separated us"

[Mitali Shah]

Wow its so romantic. God bless you each day with more love till your last breath with the same lady and love of your life. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Mitali. I appreciate the kind words.

[Mitali Shah]

your welcome dear

[Brinleigh Bailey]

You really took what was great before and made it better. 10/10 very well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Brinleigh. I appreciate the comment.

[B]

Total and utter romance
Waw

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Nisreenaa. I appreciate the kind words.

[ayesha gupta]

a lovely poem.. it is so beautiful ..you did a great work . :)
the words were simple and i can connect through your thoughts..i enjoyed it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ayesha. I appreciate the comment.