Three short poems.

Just words.

                           The surging sea, the rushing waters.
                           Our love and the sea.
                           Untamed and running wild when awaken.

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                          Enchanting lady,
                          amor alive.
                          New madness brought to life.

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                        Simple glances and amorous gazes.
                        Emerging  love being born.
                        Wild eyes leading lovers to the lofty cliffs of chance.
                        Where rapture overtakes the blessed lovers.

                           John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

New poetry. I hope you like.

Reviews

[PANDORA]

Wild eyes leading lovers to the lofty cliffs of chance.
Where rapture overtakes the blessed lovers.

Personally, i like the lines as is...I am struggling with, "wild eyes", but yeah I still like it as is.

The second poem tripped me up at, "amour alive" but I translated it in my mind and LOVE ALIVE is great written either way.

I am just stretching to try to give you a helpful critique. I am not good at writing short pieces and am humbly envious of those that can. I am going to try so thanks for the inspiration.

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm trying short pieces. I appreciate the detailed comment.

[Pryde Foltz]

Loved these works, Coyote. In particular the third one captured me.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pryde for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Max]

All three are great, I like the second one the most, still, the third one is probably the most romantic. Nicely written.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Max. I appreciate the comment.

[Max]

You are welcome :)

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aaah, YES, I like :) Very romantic, dear poet, every one, but specially the third one :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lynn for reading and the comment. I'm trying to be less epic.

[jeannemarie coulter]

all of these are wonderful and inspiring...the line below would read better if you used the word awakened...a fine penning overall...

Untamed and running wild when awaken.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dear friend. I appreciate the comment and the help.

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

awoken
paramour
raptures or overtakes

Other than those suggestions you rule. Nicely worded and fun to view. Give me some more!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the help. I do appreciate.