Read to me my dear lover

Just words

coyotepoet

             Read to me my dear lover

Longing, belonging, needing and believing.

You are my reasons to live my love.

Falling, soaring and flying to new heights in hope and dreams.

Please sweet love. Read to me my darling.

Allow me to fall into your sweet voice.

Take me to a better and sweeter place.

Hold me, caress me with gentle fingers and hands.

Sing sweet song making me believe.

You are my love and I’m safe in your arms.

                    John Castellenas/Coyote

Source:ivefreya

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Author's Note

Artwork and poetry.

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well, i like the poem. I'll point out a few parts that could be improved.

" Read to me my daring."
ok...isn't that supposed to be: " Read to me my darling."

next up...

" Take me to better and sweeter place."

it's missing an "a" = " Take me to a better and sweeter place."


this last one can be done in two good ways.. " Sing sweet song making me believe." could be : " Sing a sweet song making me believe." or " Sing sweet songs, making me believe." or " Sing me a sweet song making me believe." or " Sing me sweet songs making me believe."
well that's more than two...lol. overall it's a great poem. 100 points.

[dan]

John, Such a wistful and breezy collection of loving thoughts, it SHOULD be set to music. I'm sure more readers like myself will be left with a warm feeling after reading this lovely poem. Great job! take care...dan

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dan. Now I need a voice that could sing.

[Daydreaming]

I could see this being sung on the radio at some point. I myself not sure how to do so. But I could look forward to hearing it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the positive comment.

[Sami Khalil]

A sweet and tender song of the heart and soul. Your fingers flow in ink and blood flow of the heart. An excellent one...:)......................

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sami for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)..................

[Veronique]

Ahh John my friend it has been too long since I have visited your lovely writes and this is as soft as an angels breath that whispers lovingly to the heart...simply beautiful...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Veronique. I appreciate your kind words.

[Another Mayfly]

You have such a beauty and grace in your words. I enjoyed the notion of lover as an escape from reality? Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Scarlet Rose for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Calamityofgin]

How completely lovely and so sensual...

"Sing sweet song making me believe.
You are my love and I’m safe in your arms."
So nice...
To make love through poetry and voice...you take the idea of muse..and bind it in pure intimacy.

Just posted a piece that could be a return call to this.
In some ways..the offor of comfort through femininity to your lover...to take care.

Very happy i read....
Wishes of great love and inspiration

Calamity of Jennifer

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jennifer for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Valentine]

My husband used to read things from the paper to me that he knew I would miss as I always skimmed through it. He read much of it as he was an avid news hound. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

My Grandfather too. I remembered watching him the complete paper. I became like him now. Thank you dear Poet for reading my words.

[emmajoy]

Please sweet love. Read to me my daring. --Allow me to fall into your sweet voice. '

Oh John, what beautiful words - what a beautiful, sweet, contented love. The close, calm feel of these words would wrap around the beloved and surely, never leave. Sighhh

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend. I appreciate the comment.

[emmajoy]

Is a sigh in words, John.

[icelandicblue]

There are two things I love, having my hair washed by someone else and having someone read to me. The was a purity in your words tinged with sensuality. You have created a perfect balance with your words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. The simple things are the worthwhile things. Someone taking care of us with gentle touch like a hair washing and to hear a kind voice describing tale and story. Good place to be.