True splendor

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True splendor

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         True splendor

My timeless beauty. My wild and uncontrolled  dream. You are my forbidden wish. My secret dance needed in a fragile world. You are my first wish and my last need. You are my beautiful muse and siren. Make me wish to live and die with a whisper of hello or goodbye.…

                        John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Photo and words.

Reviews

[natureislelove]

'My timeless beauty. My wild and uncontrolled dream. You are my forbidden wish.' Good description of love & feelings. I love this poem - short and intriguing. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the good work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[GeekyGamer128]

Great description of love and lust. I loved the part when you said, "Make me wish to live and die with a whisper of hello or goodbye." Great Job! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Southern_Writes]

Beautiful depiction of love.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading. Being in love is our perfect day.

[nupur chauhan]

ohhh ... nice description ... i loved it ... me too same lil bit ... keep it up .... liked ur piece of writting

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Nupur. I appreciate the comment.

[nupur chauhan]

ur most welcome

[AaronFreitas]

"You are my first wish and my last need." I love that line my friend. A poem loaded with beauty and some romantic lines :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Aaron. I appreciate the comment.

[Shielah Yuyama]

"You are my forbidden wish". I love this line. The emotion that surrounds in this poetry is undeniably powerful and heartfelt.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Shielah. I appreciate the comment.

[andrew mitchell]

Lovely words of pure love of desire. Which train track does she walk John. Excellent poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

" Hit the above link. She is beautiful and she can dance.