When a woman smiled.

Just words

                                When an woman smiled

My  heart stopped and my world become perfect.

When your gift of your beautiful smile and laughter,

take me to sacred and cherish place.

I’m captive by your gentle green eyes and the melody of your voice.

Your smile is my opium and in your embrace. My Poet utopia.

                                John Castellenas/Coyote

Source:wearevanity.co(thank you Tumblr for the photo)

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

your poems are many times so wistful and romantic. this one could use some editing, however ... the pic supports the poem nicely and vice-a-versa ... so amazing what a simple smile can mean to someone ..we just never know what acts of kindness can accomplish ... enjoyed reading ... romance, women and smiles are infectious :)
E.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Einstein. I appreciate the honest comment.

[Einstein Noodle]

hey! we are up early this morning .. have you had your coffee? ;) love and peace sir!

[barleygirl]

Any woman would be very honored to have this written about her. Typos aside, I like to focus on the message, becuz your word choices are quite perfect & gentle & all-encompassing. Thanks for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. A woman smile and kind words. Can make a another life worthwhile.

[andrew mitchell]

yes there's more to a smile when a woman smiles that is for sure, it resonates beauty, warms the soul and is a comfort to the one who produced that feeling in her to begin with. great pic, nice poem john

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. A woman smile and kind words. Can create peace. My dear Grandmother favorite saying was. "Better to solve problems with sugar and honey than loud words and bad actions."

[andrew mitchell]

yes happy wife happy life

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right my friend.

[Terry O'Leary]

Sensually romantic... a fine write!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Terry for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Justin August]

Brief, yet elegant and profound. Very much enjoyed reading.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Justin. I appreciate the comment.

[Valentine]

Just words...one of your better writes. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my dear friend. I appreciate your kind words.

[emmajoy]

' Your smile is my opium ' ... great phrase.

Not, not, NOT 'just words' but YOUR words, John - written in your very special voice.

The photograph is a perfect accompaniment to your thoughts, perhaps memories.. Tis said that when a woman smiles with both her lips and her eyes, every sigh of her spirit loves the recipient!

[Coyote Poetry]

The smile of a woman. Make you feel worthwhile and alive. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.

[emmajoy]

You're very welcome, John.

[gentlekindness]

Lovely, sweet poetry. You have a beautiful way of writing about women. It is uniquely your style. You have a gift for making the female reader feel special and for bringing out the humanity of romance.

[Coyote Poetry]

We hope there is humanity in romance. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[cinel]

When a woman smile, my world dances to her jade eyes, honeycomb lips, and her teeth of crystal stone, I love this , for appreciating one of the power of women.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[DrD]

Just words? No inspiration? But the sense of exhaultation is obvious and makes this a delightful read.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you DrD. I appreciate the comment.

[A hare off]

Some smiles just do that to you, they mesmerize you and bring such beauty to your world that it truly can be a poetic utopia. This poem is as beautiful as I am sure her smile is.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.