Blue eyes

Just words. A re-writer written in 1984.

                         Blue eyes

A blue eyes angel is crying for me. Once we held, love was life. Life was love. The turmoil of life turned a kind love to a  chaotic love. Once a paradise of burning emotions turn to place of decision.

We have learn. Love can create a strange prison. I hold you too tightly and I don't hold you enough. The fine line of give and take, held on by a few words.

I tried to speak softly. Not create a wall of hate and regret. When the fire of disappointment overtakes the days of loving and romance. Old lovers must remember when love was new and when love was the only need.

I brought her close and I told her. I want this nightmare to end and I never wanted you to feel unwanted. You are my only gentleness I have known and my reason to be alive. I love your blue eyes and gentle smile. I know without you. My sweet dreams will turn to nightmares.

I brought her close and I whispered. Let's not fall to regret and hold me close. Let's find the energy of the days when your kiss and your embrace was my only need.

Beautiful woman tears stopped and she asked. If you love me. Be sweet to me, make me feel as I'm the only one you need.

I kissed her and I whispered. Your will is my will. Your love is what I need and want.

Love bring love.
Kindness bring kindness.
Some words should not be spoken.
For unkind words can break a heart forever.

                    John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, when the kiss and embrace was all you needed....those days are often gone when youth vanishes. Still, we can remember. We are, though, mirrors. If we are treated with love, we reflect love. Unkind words breed more unkind words. Again, your words are a pleasure to read. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Lydia. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[E G TEN]

Hey CP, Love does brings Love, a very touching piece,. and respectively wise.
still trying to figure them out my self. Sometimes our emotion. takes over
and we tens to do say/write things we regret later. You show some poise
and class in this Write, Very cool Thanks EG

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[matpat]

You have an interesting way of writing that intrigues the reader, good job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Maddie. I appreciate the comment.

[Chidoriflower]

You've captured this beautifully. I've been in a relationship for a while now, and this remains to be something we all need to remember. Love can break the hard wall sometimes, maybe even a really dumb joke. Anything to make her smile again. And it's understandable to get into fights and get all frustrated and stuff, but it's those tiny loving things that keep it together. I like this; it really makes me think. Thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for stopping by and reading. I do appreciate.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful, haunted longing. How your desires reach back over time and awaken again those tender thoughts of love. It is like a certain magic.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to find the same place after a broken heart. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Nisreen]

A very beautiful write filled with care for someone dear

Lovely
I love the blue eyes

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Poet for reading and the comment. When love was known, can be found again.

[barleygirl]

You take your reader on a roller coaster ride. I felt every bump & turn. You've conveyed the way relationships can get so messy & hurtful, when both are only a whisper away from loving kindness. I didn't expect this tale to be turned back toward loving kindness. Most can never find it again, once the raging madness & distrust begins. This is an uplifting story of renewal. Love that about it. Thanks for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we are lucky. A understanding woman is a gift to a lucky man. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Renée]

You give us a story..with a wise poetic ending. Nicely Done Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Renee. I appreciate the comment.

[Nicole Schuster]

Incredible emotion and imagery expressed in phenomenal word choice. This really makes the reader feel, as the speaker did. A wonderful work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Nicole. I appreciate the comment.

[ghostlyhearts]

Simply beautiful.
"For unkind words can break a heart forever."
Those words are very true.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.