Fever

Just words

                       

             Fever

I told her." Love don't die sweetie. Love is like the German wines, become more sweeter and tastier with time." Tonight you are wearing your red dress and dangerous smile. I felt the burning to steal you away and make you my love tonight.

Taunting words requested dancing and some wine tonight.  Your beautiful eyes making promises of perfect night and wild evening. I fall into wild brown eyes and the fever overtake me I want to feel the warmth of your lips upon my lips and the closeness of your body as we danced deep into the torment of the long night.

I felt the inferno stirring up the fever of love.  Making Your body become part of my body as the music steal us to perfect place and the utopia where lovers must reach.

You whispered. "I love you, I love you, I love you. Love goes on and on till the interlude is broken by lover swords." I brought my lover closer and I whispered.  "This is called love, my lover. Lover dance and sing till the end. The Gods will win. Death will separate us one day but tonight you are my love, my only love. My only sweet wish I know."

                                John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[r. f. jordan]

..."as we danced deep into the torment of the long night." Dearest Coyote, it has been a long while since last we communicated. my fault. i had to go attend to some things for awhile, but i was extremely pleased, upon coming back, to see that you are still active on this site. from what i recall, there was always a positive message to your work, and an unyielding encouragement to your reviews. without any offense to that good work you were posting in my past experience on here, you appear to me as if you have beautifully evolved as a writer in the close to a year i have been away. this piece does, in my opinion, a phenomenal job of expressing the fragility within that simultaneous hope and mortality that love can illicit. fantastic work, good man. please don't ever stop contributing your wisdom and talent to this site.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the kind and positive words. I'm glad to see your name appear upon my page.

[Rye]

Beautiful words, very well written

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Patient Angel for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful words! Well penned!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're welcome!

[V]

Your words always retain a romantic and loveable tone, always telling nice stories.

[Coyote Poetry]

I needed a Valentine poem for another site. This was it. Thank you Vanessa for reading and the comment.

[V]

Welcome again ;)

[Lyn Anderson]

Gentle, sexy, and uniquely your own style. "just words" you are a humble man indeed.

[Coyote Poetry]

Jack London book "When Gods laugh." One story is a discussion between a painter and a writer. They both agree. We may win for a time. Death is God's final blow. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Arthur Henn]

Love is a great gift of heart. John, never lose heart. Keep that other happy. Keep smiling, and keep writing. Never lose heart of your love. Great Poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Arthur. I appreciate the kind words.