Damn those eyes

Just words

                
                      Damn those eyes

Light and dark collide when I found you.
You are my black magic woman who make me wish for enchanting nights where you and I.
Are free and wild. Free of locked door and dormant passion. We will become wild in spirit and we will
try to consume the night like the wild beast.

My Gypsy woman. Let's find the sea and share some vodka and  juice. Let's dance for the midnight moon and the stars. Let's pray to the sleeping gods.  Pray for them to come alive and join us in the dance of freedom.


Damn your eyes. Those eyes make me forget I'm a prisoner of controlled and useless life.  You make me want to stripped down to nothing. Run nude and denounce my ordinary life and self-made prison. I want to be locked-up in your eyes and your embrace.

You and I have found the sea at Monterey. The Monterey sleeping ghosts come alive for us and we danced the movement of freedom.  You and I. We beckon sacred place where love can be true and we can show real face. Dispersed of fake goals and dreams. I whispered to you. Your eyes, your face, your wild heart make me want to live and die in your embrace.

Tonight we will live and tomorrow?

                              John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

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Reviews

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

"Those eyes make me forget I'm a prisoner of controlled and useless life."

Your words conveyed a strong and close feeling with nature and its spirits. The gypsy woman, strong and independent, her spirit run wild and free!

Thank you for sharing it John.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sarah. I appreciate the comment.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

it's amazing to see how love can cause wildness and freedom - anything seems possible with a special person by your side; the gypsy life is clearly embraced in this write

[Coyote Poetry]

I miss the Gypsy life and thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.

[Sami Khalil]

A gorgeous and an enchanting write that soothes the hearts and smoothes the rough edges. A celebratory heart-song of the gypsy spirit and Spanish beauty. A man, a poet who sees beyond the facade into the true beauty of things. Whoa....::::))))

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sami. The amazing singer was my muse for this one.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome. ...::::)))))

[Papaya]

I love this and everything that it stirs and the gypsy blood that runs through feels the passion in your writing. Always a treat for the heart and soul.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend. I appreciate comment.

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jac..]

A trait I have noticed with your writing, is the ability to create dreamlike scenes; they are often lucid, somewhat fantastical but also very real with their emotions and nostalgia. This write fits that mold and is captivating because of it.

I like the metaphor of eyes being what captures your heart and are a window into what makes people who they are. I also like the ambiguity of the ending too, saying that we don't know what the future holds for us so live for today. Thank you for sharing this Coyote, it's another strong write.

[Coyote Poetry]

Listen to this singer. She make you want to write and thank you Jack for reading and the comment.

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)]

I'll have to give her a listen then and you are welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

She will steal your heart. A Spanish beauty I believe.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

The eyes are always full of power,
nice reflection on them.
"I whispered to you. Your eyes, your face, your wild heart make me want to live and die in your embrace."--love this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Josie. Also a amazing singer. She made me want to write. Music can be a good muse.

[mou]

eyes is the door of heart also..it's so gentle and heart soothing

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[Valentine]

And tomorrow? Sadly for many that tomorrow never comes. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime tomorrow will become what may be. We must enjoy the good days. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[PhoenixDown]

"My Gypsy woman."

"Damn your eyes."

"Let's dance for the midnight moon and the stars."

"You and I have found the sea.."

"Your eyes, your face, your wild heart make me want to live and die in your embrace."

These lines, as well as this piece, are all universally mind blowing & soul crushing. Congratulations Coyote. You have once again made me melt.

Phoenix

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[PhoenixDown]

You are absolutely most welcome. You are stunning support, a great person, & a very talented writer. Your writing speaks volumes on matters which most are only left to feel, unknowingly to themselves. You share these beautiful, deeply seeded emotional experiences with people and they all in turn resonate greatly with us - your audience. I appreciate your work very much so, my friend.

[PhoenixDown]

I also really dig the title. I can imagine saying those words to myself, gritting my teeth, kicking up dirt or something ahaha.

Phoenix

[Coyote Poetry]

I appreciate the comment my friend and some woman eyes can steal our soul.

[PhoenixDown]

Aye.........