Lie to me

Just words

                            

                    Lie to me

You disrobe slowly and stand bare and nude in front of me.

You reach-out to me. Took my vodka and juice drink and you whispered

“Redemption are for the lucky ones.

Us wallowing in sin and gin.

Need the cheap motel and the poet’s lies.

I like the dark motel room dear lover.

Smell like dirty streets and old sin.

Love cost dear Poet and the chaos of the shade of love can be enough.

Make me a vodka and juice with some extra vodka,

to kill the wish for anything that can be profound.

Dear poet. Sin, gin and deep bottles  of vodka are the sorry sounds of

the people wanting nothing. This is us.”

John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"Sin, gin and deep bottles of vodka are the sorry sounds of
the people wanting nothing."

This line strikes me - are people who sleep around and drink truly happy people who live within the moment, or are they unhappy people who are trying to find some satisfaction? I really don't know if getting jealous of people who can carelessly mingle is petty or not.

[Coyote Poetry]

In the end. We need someone. I lost two brothers to suicide in 1988 and 1989. Took me ten years to truly show real face. Broken hearts comes for many reasons. Everyone need a safe haven. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.

[Valentine]

John, for some reason this write to me says more about you. Another good write. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend. I appreciate the comment. Old Johnnie is gone. Just Grandpa and old memories are left.

[Valentine]

Had to smile at that remark. I still like feeling the Indian side of you come out when you express your feelings. Just enjoy those little ones, they grow up to soon. Kathie

[Lovecraft]

Artfully dark and entertaining. Going deep into drink and sex to hide from ones failures and bad memories. I love the title too.

Very well done Trickster, though there are some issues pertaining to grammar and syntax. ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment and the advice shared.

[PhoenixDown]

As if you took both of your palms and pressed into my chest heavily. You have moved my soul, my friend.

"This is us."
Ultra powerful.

Phoenix

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Phoenix. I appreciate the comment.