My whiskey

Just words

                           My whiskey


She danced alone on the dance floor at the Jazz club. Moving her  body with a gentle ease and making every movement of perfect long legs, wonderful womanly curves and hips. Permanent tattoos upon my memory and my eyes.

I went to her. She fell into my arms and she asked. "Am I your sweet red wine my love? Am I sugar and spice? Everything nice?"

I whispered to her. You are not soft and easy red wine. You are demanding and greedy. You make my quiet nights, turn to wild and untamed places.  You are fire and ice. When you are near. I yearn for your body near and I want to have your fingertips upon my skin and your wanting mouth to digest me and make me know death and fire.

My pretty lady , you are my whiskey. Hard and rough on my body and soul.  I yearn to taste you and my sweet baby. I know the payment for loving you. Top-shelf whiskey is tasty, smooth and demands everything.

                         John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

Sometimes you have to take a deep breath to prepare oneself to remember these images of beauty that will linger and haunt one for the rest of your days and the whiskey helps wash it all down. A lovely write I know it's more about the drink but what's a drink without sharing with a good woman. .

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. Whiskey make the conversation free and dangerous. Whiskey taste better with good company. Thank you Andrew for reading and the comment.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

this is a very classy depiction of lust; classiness and romance is usually forgotten when expressing the beauty of women, but i am glad you are different :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are very kind to me. I appreciate the many comment dear friend.

[Isabella Ivy]

Sensual and indeed delivers warning. I enjoyed this! Isabella.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Isabella. I appreciate the comment.

[Isabella Ivy]

You're welcome!

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a raw passion in this one, John. The lines are sensual and seductive. Wonderful work. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lydia. I appreciate the comment.

[emmajoy]

My goodness, John, you've created very warm emotions for afternoon reading. Perhaps I should have been protected by a Mature label. Will now go turn down the heating.. Your lady really was intoxicating as your writing often is !

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend. I appreciate the comment.

[emmajoy]

Always welcome..

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I shall remind you that whisky is a Scottish tradition dear Johnny lol!
Another well described and colourful tableau.

[Coyote Poetry]

I have drank the whiskey in Scotland. Almost marry a Scottish beauty. Thank you John for reading and the comment.