Landscape

Just words

                               Landscape

Forget me not and

please remember me always.

I remember you.

You were perfect valleys and you were like the free mountains of the California desert.

Your body, perfect landscape to discover secrets and know wonderful places.

The landscape of soft and tender skin became my rhyme and song to the sea and for the forest.

I remember the taste of your skin and your tempting smile.

You were my perfect journey.

Forget me not and remember me always.

I remember you.

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                               Drifting

I didn't know.

You and I were just seconds, minutes and hours.

Today I write letters, never to be send.

Regards to you my muse, my siren, my love and my murderer.

I whispered to the half-moon.

I didn't know.

Love was just a illusion.

So damn hard to hold on to and we can never forget.

                          John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Zoya]

The 'landscape' part reminds me of a line- "Everyone in the world has one poem, that is their soulmate". Guess that sums up quite a lot. The second part- goodness me! Wonderfully eloquent lines! Really liked this one-'Regards to you my muse, my siren, my love and my murderer'. A very romantic write, as ever.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Zoe. I appreciate the comment. I believe you are right. Few people can excite our heart and soul.

[Zoya]

Most welcome

[User]

Coyote, I loved the first two lines especially, then read on and loved the rest too. The use of metaphor in this is really beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dotty. I appreciate your kind words.

[sette]

Love was just a illusion.
So damn hard to hold on to and we can never forget.

I like these two lines, speaks out how love can sometimes be unreal if we are hurting. but no matter what it is still very hard to go.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. Love is a honor to behold and to know. Rarely touches a life. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[sette]

you are very much welcome

[lightsong]

You always touch our hearts with Your sensitive spirituality and in depth passions, describing beauty not all can be able to, some gorgeous expressions here, where love become larger and larger.... Thank You*

[Coyote Poetry]

You are very kind dear friend and thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[lightsong]

anytime my friend*

[Weeping willow]

These are wonderfully expressed words,Each soul in passing connects.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, but this illusion was grand while it lasted...and you explored love....
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right my friend and thank you for reading and the comment.

[Lydia Shutter]

"You were my perfect journey." You remember her so fondly and with such passion, John. No doubt she remembers as well. No matter how brief the connection, it meant something. Such a lovely reminiscence. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Lydia. Old memories become more sweet with time and distance.

[Paul Bell]

There's always that time and place where people touch you for a time.
It's always pleasing when this happens.
We're all out here living. But some memories get you through the day.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree Paul. Thank you for reading.

[Jon Roggie]

I couldn't write this. I could put down the words, but it wouldn't feel the same. You have your own touch.
Jon

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jon. Just my attempt at short poetry.

[mou]

it's more than words..!so soothing to have a pleasant and warm love..read it quite like a lyrics..thank you Coyote for sharing this with us

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the kind words.