Whiskey

Just words.

                         Whiskey

Lovely Liz

With pen and paper I write, spilled blood upon notions of things wanted and so damn far away.
We secretly abated love and you became my wish to behold. I wanted you. To taste your lips like  the Crown Royal whiskey. Slow and easy.

You called me honey, sweetie and dear. I called you my dark mistress, my haunting mademoiselle and endearing perfect beauty.

We pro-longed deep and long kisses. Knowing we treaded on quicksand where love could not grow.
My lovely Liz. I want us to run away and I want to know your secret places and learn glimpse of the storm you try to hold in. I see in your eyes. Tamed life starving for the midnight dance and I feel your longing for new places and someone to worship your face, your skin and your heart.

We danced once the deadly dance of free love and we exposed real skin and voice.
Sadly we accepted less dear Liz.

I pray you have escaped and find someone who loved you like the rising moon and the dawn sun. I pray you know laughter and you will dance the magic movement of where lovers. Know the wildness and freedom of hiding nothing and showing real skin and real face.

John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Coyote or JOhn I am so glad I read this this is superb in my humble opinion. I loved it from beginning to end the title actually got me in. I loved it, is this a true story about yourself and someone else or is it fiction, if you dont want to say i understand but either way i loved it to bits. Its on my favs now!

[Coyote Poetry]

It was true. A old tale. Us writers need memories and wishes. Thank you Julie for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[lightsong]

ah! again You fascinate us with Your "just words", and drift us away with them, into a world of books, I wonder how many many words are there inside Your heart waiting to be laid down, endless ones I believe... and we are the lucky ones!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my dear friend for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate. I have 50 plus journals of writing. 40 years of words.

[lightsong]

yes... endless magical words coming from Your ever gold pen! thank You!

[Carolynn]

A very intimate and compelling read Coyote - your passion for Liz turns from a dangerous lust to a sincere love for this lovely lady who you now only wish the best for as she must have been struggling with some unfortunates situations that kept her just out of reach.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right dear Carolynn. Some things, we cannot have. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Carolynn]

my pleasure :)

[H.L. Cerveise]

You did it again Coyote! You have wrapped a doomed beautiful love in scenery that opens the mind and heart.

Well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Chris Shaw]

Tender words and thoughts expressed here for lovely Liz. Wonderful that you always want the best for the friends and lovers you have known. That tells the reader a great deal about you and your philosophy on life Coyote. A lovely read.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Chris. Sometime we can't have what we think we need. Some people need to be free.

[LKBillips]

Really beautiful story here. I love your endearments and the idea of knowing it couldn't last but taken the experience none the less. The line " Knowing we treaded on quicksand where love could not grow." Such a powerful notion. I really enjoyed this piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.