Vaya con dios

Just words.

                             Vaya con dios

Song, sin and gin.

not enough to forget you.

We said goodbye and I learn, I was alone.

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I have pretty pictures,

warm memories and

I don't have you.

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Vaya con dios,

maybe tomorrow,

maybe never.

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Your face, your hands,

your words, your kindness.

To hear your voice,

one more time.

Just wishes lost in the storm of life.

                            Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Neville]

Just another one I wish I had written myself folks... nice one Coyote and then some... N

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Neville and I appreciate the comment my friend.

[Neville]

always a pleasure & true..

[mandy]

nicely done. song, sin and gin..we said goodbye,,,,,,,,,i was alone....party face on the outside,,alone and hurting inside..

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Mandy for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wonderfully melancholy in its story as the protagonist attempts unsuccessfully to drown out his sorrow and loss. Nicely put Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you John. I appreciate the comment.

[Rye]

SO very wonderful, I love this...
expressed the emotions well, love the song.
I have a write that is put on my file called "Song, sin and Gin" I have never put it on here cause it may be too deep and personal for some. I love your write

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ryanna. I have 10 journals of writing. I have not published. Some words tell too much.

[Anjeline]

Wonderful piece my friend. The phrase vaya con dios is beautifully used and is the essence of the poem:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Anjeline. I appreciate the comment.

[Anjeline]

You're welcome 😊