This one really had a lot of hurt in it, but also resignation. The ache in this was palpable and I really liked that, the amount of heartbreak you poured into this. And the last few ending lines were chilling. All in all, an absolutely, wonderful fantastic poem.
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I told the lonely night,
love don't live here no-more.
Somewhere in time,
we forgot the kindness,
we forgot what we were.
These lines here makes me sad, but so truthful. Powerful wording through out this write.
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5 Years Ago
Thank you my dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate. When the love leave us, love .. read moreThank you my dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate. When the love leave us, love won't come back again.
This one is full of loss and pain. The last line tells it all. Although the love was long gone, the finality of separation was a little death. Too many people have gone through such experiences.
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You are right John. I learned a few times and we all do. In Jack London book, When God laugh, he wro.. read moreYou are right John. I learned a few times and we all do. In Jack London book, When God laugh, he wrote. God always win. He will teach us sadness one day. Death.
This one really had a lot of hurt in it, but also resignation. The ache in this was palpable and I really liked that, the amount of heartbreak you poured into this. And the last few ending lines were chilling. All in all, an absolutely, wonderful fantastic poem.
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
Thank you my dear friend. I appreciate the comment.
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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