The waltz

Rewritten today with proper edit. I hope.

The waltz …

We were doing a waltz upon the quiet beach.
 The waves were the orchestra and
 the wind was whispering a love song.

 I tossed you into a twirl and
 I brought her back to me.

 By the light of the moon.
 Two lovers danced the movement of freedom
 and celebrating being alive.

 We come back to the ocean after each journey.
 The ocean keeps our secrets.
The dancing waves are always waiting.

  You was as beautiful as when I first saw you at the poetry reading in 1994
  and I held her by the sea, like you were my last breath.

 We were two shadows upon a naked beach.
Doing the dance of hope and freedom.

 The cold of winter is surrounding us.
We warm each other with laughter and dancing.

 Two friends, lovers  and travelers who come to celebrate being alive.
Peace for a moment for two people who love the road.

 We find each other at the end of our journeys.
Two wanderers in search of peace and wonder.

  I love you my beautiful  Beatrice

                   COYOTE    
                  1996

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

A love story of two who love to journey, enjoy adventure and ultimately return to the sand and the ocean to dance , live life in peace and harmony. The waves are always waiting for you, there is much hope an freedom in this poem. Very well done.
Best Betty

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Betty. The ocean, good company and good drink. Utopia for the hopeful in heart.

[Betty Hermelee]

Yes indeed!

[emmajoy]

It's such a comfort to read words like yours, the fact that gentle love and two hearts sharing touches of magic is... somehow comforting and inspiring at the same time. Thank you. Take care and please, keep safe.

Forgive this late review after your many to and for me.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Emma. I always appreciate your reviews and thank you.

[lightsong]

anyone who reads You will feel calmness, will be at peace, their hearts to be lifted with a tender breeze, here there is no different, just for me it's more special for some reasons, I was writing something unfinished few days ago and some of my words ring here. Thank You so much my friend for keep sharing your words and filling our hearts with so much love, ease and gentleness 💕

[Coyote Poetry]

I hope to read your new poem and thank you for reading and the comment my friend. I am fixing my old poetry. Trying to stay in one tense.

[lightsong]

all the best for You through your editing sometimes it can be tough this "editing" thing lol, so welcome You are✨