You don't love me no-more.

May-day poetry thirty two

                   You don't love me no-more.......

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I longed to see your face, I longed to hear your speak.

I knew I was gone too long and you gave-up on me.

I watched you from a distance and you are dancing with a beautiful child.

I left you be, I knew.

Don't rain on things that are gone and so damn far away.

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I told the pretty gal,

I am fond of your smile,

please tell me a story.

I want to hear the softness in your voice,

I want to watch the movement of your lips.

Please make me feel safe for a moment.

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You don't love me no-more.

I can see in your eyes,

remnants and fragments of was we were.

Somewhere we forgot what made us good together.

Now we are waiting to see,

who will escape first.

Coyote

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[J. F. Charleston]

I can't tell you how this resonates, friend. Recently, I had to escape something where one of us still cared and after years of lies and abuse. Didn't help she had a kid and that I wanted to feel for her. So, thank you for this one. I'm moving on, but sometimes it comes back to me.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello my friend. Hard to escape a messy relationship. But sometime we must and thank you for reading and the comment.

[Azifwecare]

The 3rd part breaks my heart cause it reminds me of someone from my past. Sad but lovely poem Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Saraswati]

Beautiful poem written out of diminishing love and affection...the pain of dejection and disdained self is very much clear here..

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Sara for reading and the comment. When the love is gone. It become just a dying fire.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when the eyes grow cold and distant....we feel right down to the bones of our heart.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree Jacob. Can't revive a dead heart. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Lisa C]

Lovely words for a bad stuation. Love it. Thanks for the write ;-) x

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Lisa for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Melinda McQueen]

An heartfelt write filled with emotion. It's sad when love dies, but sadder still when it dies for one where the other still loves.
Nicely done, my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Melinda for reading and the comment. When Love died. Always died painfully.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

This is so true
Waiting to see who will escape first
Great write romantic sad dramatic
🙆‍♀️

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Julie. i appreciate the comment.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

No worries 😉