Wild child

Thank you dear Alexia Evellyn for the song. Please listen to her songs. A free spirit, She teaches us. We can be more than what we are.

The poet loved the careless girl,

he loved the girl who loved the sweet wines and

she could make him smile with her dance, her beautiful voice and her eyes of hope.

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She told me, the world don't imprison us.

We do.

Please quit seeking the goals of the world and find the narrow path,

the less walked on path.

You will find quiet forest and beautiful moving river.

And you will find me.

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She told him, I am more savage than you believe.

I want to run bare-a*s into the forest of the mountain and

I want to swim in the hidden waterfall.

Will you join me brave soldier?

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She told the moon, I am the child of the stars and

I am my mother savage daughter.

My father told me.

I was the free sky, the wild Winter Pacific storm.

I followed my father into the sea and

I followed my father and we danced with the moving river.

I followed my father to the secret waterfalls.

We would sing and dance for the sun and the moon.

My father loved to laugh, loved quiet places and no walls.

I saw the savage still in his eyes and I followed his path.

Now I show my father the free sky, the dancing sea and I ensure.

He knows I am his  daughter, I was the child of the moon and

I am the child of the sun.

I am my mother savage child and my father's free song.

Coyote 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Orphic dreamer]

“ I was the free sky, the wild Winter Pacific storm.
I followed my father into the sea and
I followed my father and we danced with the moving river.
I followed my father to the secret waterfalls.
We would sing and dance for the sun and the moon.”
These lines make me so nostalgic as though chasing for a home that I have never visited before.

This poem just brings out a new form of Independence... It's so hauntingly beautiful. Following a ruthless journey to find a serene destination...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. We need to teach our children to love freedom and to seek their dreams.

[Peter Garfield]

YES. Wow, this poem felt so incredibly freeing just to read. I wanted to follow her down into the forest, I wanted to join her in her freedom. I think you so beautifully captured the essence of this old song in a way that a lot of us might connect with. So well written!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Marissa for reading and the comment. We must teach our children to love freedom. We must remember, we lock our doors and we create our own self-prisons.

[Fran Marie]

born a free wild spirit to embrace
all that nature allows us
to inhale the magical life force
There is nothing we lack we
must use what is given us

so well penned

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Fran. Freedom is missed, when we don't have her.

[Fran Marie]

you're s o welcome

[Betty Hermelee]

We imprison our selves, so let’s try to break free and enjoy the wild planet, the restless one….let roams naked in the forest, let the noob guide our way, ….savage daughter seeks freedom to love, to live, to want, to do what my father told me to do….child of the sun….
Really beautiful write John
Best,
B.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Betty. We are the example to our child. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Betty Hermelee]

My pleasure John😊

[Melinda McQueen]

Oh to be a free spirit. Love to images you posed in my head. A lovely write indeed. Thanks for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Melinda for reading and the comment. We must know freedom. Even if just words and books to show us the way.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You do some great poems but this is my favorite. I think of a line from the Eagles song "Take It Easy". You live your life in chains never knowing you have the key.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend and thank you for reading and the kind words.

[Cherrie]

The free spirit willful, young and ever enduring. Loved the poem and the song.

[Coyote Poetry]

The young singer is amazing. Maybe nineteen now. A South American gal. I agree dear Cherrie. Good to know freedom. Thank you for reading and the comment.