The prettiest gal in Michigan...

August new poetry number seventeen.

The prettiest gal in Michigan..

(August new poetry seventeen.)

I kissed the prettiest gal in Michigan and

her lips tasted of beer and the Irish whiskey.

She told me, Johnnie, the quiet poet.

You write about everything,

you write about your great adventures,

maybe you need crazier in your life,

more adventures.

I kissed her again,

enjoying the taste of the beer on her lips and

I told her.

Maybe we need more adventures,

maybe we need the doors unlocked and

the open sea and the great forest.

Maybe we need to tell the world, to f**k off.

Show our faces again.

The prettiest gal in Michigan,

please follow me,

we will find the highway 40,

we will travel till we reach the Pacific.

Let’s find the California sea,

where the waves are never tamed.

She smiled and she told me.

You talk the talk, do your walk the talk?

We have nothing here no-more and

let’s become Gypsies,

love-making fools and

find our real voice again.

Our real faces again.

Coyote

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"She smiled and she told him.
You talk the talk, do your walk the talk?"

I'm at a loss to know who the "him" is in this couplet if it isn't you and then it would be "me" to you and not "him" eh? And I think the word "your" should be the word "you" here also for proper syntax. Other than these errors I found the piece romantic and nostalgic while flavored with the wanderlust of adventure. So, did you take her away to see the Pacific to find that adventuresome love? I hope so.

[Coyote Poetry]

I will repair my friend. I appreciate the help.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I love your writing. I'd love to see you publish an entire book of your poetry. It's so real and honest and straight from the heart; never fake or fabricated. F.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Hmmmmmm........walk the walk ......i would rather dance....real faces are ther you just gottra remove the mask....

[Coyote Poetry]

Maybe I should follow dear Kelly. Thank you for reading.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

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