'I told her, she was my last dream, she was my last wish. Dear Maria.
You have stolen my soul; you have stolen my heart.
Maria smiled and she told me. Never love a woman who is never content.
Some of us, always need more.
I told her. Love be sweet, love be damned. Sometimes we accept what we are given.'
Your history of loving this or that woman all over the world is known to so many as is your writing, sir. Your writing, 'said' in so many ways, is testament in the art of loving for as long as the heart and body of a man or woman needs the comforting thrill of desire and passion. Sez I!
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Thank you, Emmajoy. Some people are keepers and some people. Are runners.
'I told her, she was my last dream, she was my last wish. Dear Maria.
You have stolen my soul; you have stolen my heart.
Maria smiled and she told me. Never love a woman who is never content.
Some of us, always need more.
I told her. Love be sweet, love be damned. Sometimes we accept what we are given.'
Your history of loving this or that woman all over the world is known to so many as is your writing, sir. Your writing, 'said' in so many ways, is testament in the art of loving for as long as the heart and body of a man or woman needs the comforting thrill of desire and passion. Sez I!
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Thank you, Emmajoy. Some people are keepers and some people. Are runners.
A night of pure ecstasy..that's what you desire dear John,( in your piece) you seem to pick these woman who are difficult to latch on to... though I must say, I love your approach, always very sensual and a bit old-fashioned, like in the 50's; your words are always pleading, somewhat like you have had a couple of those Texas whiskeys.... the loneliness you convey between you and your hopeful lover is so true and clear....your stories (scenes) are a perfect read always....
Warmly, B
Posted 3 Months Ago
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2 Months Ago
Thank you, dear Betty. I have always sought the wild ones. They loved freedom over love.
Ah, but that we could all be in contact with the Marias of our lives. Of course, in my case, my old woman probably wouldn't understand.
Posted 3 Months Ago
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3 Months Ago
It is good to be young my friend. Maria kept living hard till she could not. I hope you are doing we.. read moreIt is good to be young my friend. Maria kept living hard till she could not. I hope you are doing well and thank you for reading and the comment.
It has been two long since I've had the privilege of someone in my life who would "play the devil and the angel in the same embrace.". Nicely done. ~Jim
Posted 3 Months Ago
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3 Months Ago
They rarely call to us my friend. Thank you, for reading and the comment.
Two very lonely people sharing special time together. Making the most of those restricted moments.
let’s talk little and make this night last forever
And all those years later, you remember her.
Honest and beautiful Coyote. I hope you are well dear poet and still have time for your grandchildren, even though you have returned to work. Take good care of yourself.
Chris
Posted 3 Months Ago
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3 Months Ago
Hello dear Chris. USA is getting harder. The nuts are in-charge. Poor 67-year Johnnie returned to wo.. read moreHello dear Chris. USA is getting harder. The nuts are in-charge. Poor 67-year Johnnie returned to work. Some people leave us with good memories. Thank you, dear friend for reading and the comment.
Coyote
Coyote, this is truly beautiful. I feel the quiet pulse between the lines..the way words are almost unnecessary because the night and bodies speak for themselves. They talk little, but the intimacy fills every space, every pause. I love how the poem lingers on the simplicity of presence, the way kisses, embraces, and shared warmth can be enough, even when love is messy, hungry, and restless. “Love be sweet, love be damned” is so romantic. it’s almost a sigh, a confession, and it makes the whole night feel eternal.
..Roma
Posted 3 Months Ago
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3 Months Ago
Thank you, dear Roma. The woman Peggy, we tried three times. She taught me. Can't hold a wild animal.. read moreThank you, dear Roma. The woman Peggy, we tried three times. She taught me. Can't hold a wild animal in the prison of love. I appreciate the comment.
Coyote, this feels like one of those nights you never quite forget --the kind that burns a little wisdom into you. That image of Maria in her tee and that line, “never love a woman who is never content,” hit hard. It’s like she already knew she was a storm, and he walked in anyway. There’s beauty in that kind of chaos though -- the honesty of two lonely people just trying to feel something real, even for a night. Sometimes that’s all we get, and that’s enough.
James☆
Posted 3 Months Ago
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3 Months Ago
Thank you Jansy. Sometimes we must loan and borrow kisses.
A Poet and writer who love to read and write.
My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life.
Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words.
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